I loved this story. It was so beautiful and amazing. It was inspired by a good song too, Lucy is a sweet and melancholy song that I enjoy myself. And Skillet is a really good band too. Wonderful job and I can't wait to continue reading more of your work.

Beautiful.

I like this one. Tony could well go that way. It is always good to see a hero get the homecoming they deserve. I want the show to make them all go home at some ancient age though...

I did not expect to have tears and mucus streaming down my face by the end of this. You write very well.

ha, I had a feeling it was from skillet.

And oh my goodness, bawl my little eyes out, I never read full on tragedies, but this was perfect, somehow it was okay for him to die, and the short was just the right size :) I liked it a lot :)

Okay, so its good writing and all, but try a different genre, please! This disturbed and moved me; how could you write all that death? The story is good, and I can tell youre a great writer, but death stuff isnt really for me. I prefer Tiva and McAbby, you know? So yeah, great story, not for me though. Try a different genre, youve got real talent!

damn that was some sad shiz right there...

It was awesome I loved it. :)

Not silly, beautifully written, cried all the way through.