Love it!

Hi! I know this is an old story, but I've been reading old stories and I really enjoyed this. Definitely one of the best Avengers story that I've read.

I like this analysis of the characters. I look forward to more!

this was really great! had a great time reading this. love the way u wrote tony, it felt so in character! thanks for writing this!

For Thor's pov maybe you can just change some words and make it sound more like Thor is speaking. i.e EarthMidgard and Iron manMan of Iron

What is up with you fucking writers and your inability to use possessives properly?
For instance - doctors not doctor's.
You are talking about "doctor" in plural, not about what a particular doctor owns.
doctors' - That would be something owned by multiple doctors.
Seriously - basic English people. Something that you imbeciles appear to be totally incapable of understanding and applying.

Freaking well amazing. Just amazing. I really liked how, well, paranoid Tony as towards his friends, and how it paid off in the end. And I love how Tony DOES care, even if he only shows it with his actionsYour writing style is really enjoyable to read as well.

THIS WAS AMAZING. I love your writing style

Hahaha, this was a good story! Tony is certainly a character... He's really perceptive and thinks ahead too, even if people call it paranoia. Haha. Nice work. :)

Aww, pepper is nice!
:D

This is a really good set/series, and the way you've written it is fantastic, because it means you can come back and add to it whenever the mood strikes, and new films can easily be incorporated in.
Really brilliant, thank you for sharing it with us!
Maya

This was excellently written and I really liked the background given; the thought of the Avengers acting like highschoolers made me laugh :P

I haven't read a fic on this site in a while, but I'm glad I started with this. I really loved the asides in parentheses; they gave the chapter so much background and personality. I also like how this is in Pepper's POV and it wasn't out of character at all.
Can't wait to read the rest! :)

Wow this is the fourth time have read this story. I usually read things only once but this is amazing. I love Tony and the teams thoughts on him. This is really good.

Me lieky your observy.

-TC