The pace is so slow. Only thoughs and explanation with little talk and action makes this ff utterly boring.

What happened to the law suit that harry was filling against bones. Mad eye moody was insulting his entire family infront of him and harry was silent. For someone who was supposed to be this grey lord and all. He takes shit from everyone. What a pathetic ff. Highly boring and uninteresting

well damn.
it's been years since you've updated but dear God I hope you decide to continue this and update soon. it's incredible and I can't stop crying.
I actually thought that harry was going to use breaking the seal as an excuse to say that he was seeing possible visions of the future (rather than the sug with ignotus) because he'd be able to share a but more information with people then.
and I can't believe how short it is in the timeline! you've written so much and we haven't even had the world cup yet! (speaking of which, if the death eaters do attack, I'm looking forward to harry killing a bunch of them)
this story is really something, and I dearly hope it continues. I can't wait you see what more would happen! I look forward to the next chapter! happy writing!

Please please please update, your a brilliant author and this is an epic fanfiction

Absolutely fantastic. I binged this entire story in one night. Didn't get a wink of sleep. I'm so sad you never finished it. I don't know if you'll even see this review, but I just want to thank you for such a great read. I hope one day you will come back to continue. If you do, I'll be reading!

while it was a good plot... the fic itself is boring.

nice story there. hope to read more soon

Interesting story but to slow and dare I say a little boring.

I enjoyed the story very much...hope u consider continuing it

amazing

Gray lord?

Why?

This was looking good.

aaanñd... That's it?

Yeah... It hasn't been all that well explored. Which is weird because I've read nearly 1000 five in this genre. But the only way anyone ever gives Riddle a body is the book four, cauldron in the cemetery, "bone of the father" method.
So you have- what (?) wearing Slytherin's locket, becoming some kind of CoS shade of pre-Voldemort, young Tom, whatever age he was after gaining the locket from Hepzibah Smith. Was he a spirit without a host? Doesn't sound like a homonculus again. But wouldn't there have to some kind of solid form to 'put on the necklace' and become whatever he is now?
Did the ghostly shade thingy fly into the locket and come out as a nearly solid, not quite finished product, Tom Riddle, circa 1950? (guessing three years after he graduated, twenty years old, is that '50?)

I'm sure we are about to find out how YOU percieve it was that Voldemort could see Harry and James, next chapter. I guess I'm too much of a "these are the rules of this A/U, and they have been set by the original Canon as if they were physics itself (or some deity, if you prefer).
If Riddle saw Harry, through the wards he set, then he is doing 'something' that we can't possibly know... because we KNOW the 'rules', and this is against all that we 'know'.
I don't like it. And I could quit, and I may, still, but I aint there- yet.
It's kind of like playing with friends when you were little, and every time you start winning, then they want to change the rules. know what I mean?
Why can't we play by the rules?

Good, proper, profanity!
In a world where most are heathens, pagans, or atheists (count me as one), you usually get "Merlin be damned", or 'Gods damned", or something completely ignoring Christianity. That was kind of refreshing!