Reviews for Grey Skies and Sunshine |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Beautifully written! Thank you for sharing this beautiful story, well-written and exactly in the "style" of the Hunger Games series. I love also the birth scene, and how their daughter is named Grace. A truly wonderful story, a nice ending after all the turmoil that goes on in the series. |
![]() ![]() That was... AMAAAAAAZIIIIIIIING! |
![]() ![]() I flipping love this so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just finished reading the books, and needed more, so glad I found your story, it’s a nice bridge to the epilogue |
![]() ![]() ![]() There are no words... this story was beyond perfect! I favorited this story so I can waste another day one day just reading and laughing and crying :) |
![]() ![]() I like the last sentence when katniss wants a cheese bun. |
![]() ![]() Love the story amazing |
![]() ![]() I loved this story! it is so nice to read a story where your characters are already together. Marriage isn't the ending of a story like so many suggest, it's just the beginning! I love the way you developed the characters, they felt real and highly believable! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very well written birthing scene! Just a couple of things- 1) You sometimes change tense which is a little disconcerting. 2) Once the head is out I believe that women are told to pant and do small pushes rather than one big one, as this prevents the baby sliding out too fast and helps prevent tearing to some extent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() God, that must be so frightening, knowing that he could turn on her at any moment. It must be so hard on them both. |
![]() ![]() ![]() As someone with depression, this chapter really hit home. You've done a good job portraying it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love Peeta's cheeky side! It's really sweet that Haymitch wants to keep a photo, even if he effectively steals it! I wonder if there's baby stuff in those boxes...? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this line: 'our fingers laced together like the branches over our heads'. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the last line of this chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I admit I did hated Katniss at some point, but yeah, she is sick, glad she made it to the other side and was there for her family. (FNSHD) |