Reviews for Going Dark
Lestat74 chapter 12 . 2/6
Good job! You kept my attention to the end! The plot and the interaction between the guys was intense and the end was so perfect with Kensi and Deeks immersed in a sweet but dark end. You have talent for writing!
Guest chapter 12 . 3/26/2018
Would of loved that ending without kensi would of been the perfect ending with focis on Callen Deeks and Sam
mefoote chapter 7 . 6/8/2016
Hope you had a great vacation
wonderworldofmine chapter 1 . 10/8/2015
I really liked the way this story made you feel like Deeks was their little brother.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/24/2014
Great story! I wish they would put something like this on the show.
Jasmine-N-Leaves chapter 12 . 4/14/2014
I came across this story before I had an account and loved it then, even thought it wasn't finished. Having just found it again, I read it all and am adding it to my long list of favourites. It was one of the first stories I read on this site and I still love it. You did the characters justice and you should be proud. Well Done!
ananova chapter 12 . 10/26/2013
Nice bonding between the guys. I liked Deeks' realization at the end that Sam and Callen are his big brothers. Now if he'd only tell them that, I'm sure they see him as the annoying little brother, you know, the one nobody is allowed to mess with but them. Great fic, thanks for sharing. My only disappointment is that we didn't actually get to see Deeks and Callen interact as brothers when they were undercover.
Cello06 chapter 12 . 5/14/2013
great job on this one!
macberly chapter 12 . 2/12/2013
I have been devouring all of your fics since I came across them! This I would have to say is my favorite! I love Deeks and I love this story of bonding with Sam and Callen! I love the teasing and flirting that he and Kensi do on the show but this brotherly story just made me smile! Excellent story! Thank you for sharing!
jmlane1966 chapter 12 . 8/5/2012
Thank you for three great case and writing.i like your writing a lot.
jmlane1966 chapter 10 . 8/5/2012
Poor Deeks. Hope you don't break him up to much more physically or mentally.
jmlane1966 chapter 9 . 8/5/2012
Sad that Bowers died. Was hoping he'd get a chance to prove himself. Your action sequences are very good.
jmlane1966 chapter 8 . 8/5/2012
Good twists and turns. Like that Seeks is tough and respected by G and Sam.
jmlane1966 chapter 7 . 8/5/2012
Quick action. Snappy quips. Fast moving plot. Good writing.
jmlane1966 chapter 5 . 8/5/2012
This is an exhilarating story. The guys are so tough and uncompromising. The dialogue sounds like the show. Thanks for the great story.
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