I.

Was not expecting that.

Excuse me!

I almost thought we got a happy ending there, how naive of me.

But it was excellent, heartbreaking and really in character, and even as someone who doesn't ship Johnlock, that ending was pretty beautiful.

Try not to kill everyone, next time, though.

This is the most beautifully terrifying falling-apart I could ever have dreamed of.

Jesus Christ. why do I keep doing this to myself? I'm sure I would be very sad right now, but sentiment is a chemical defect found in the losing side. Oh, well. Looks like I'm on the losing side.

It's. Absolutely. Amazing!
and Deastating..

Oh my god .
How could you.
I'm actually sobbing and I don't know who to blame. You I guess.
I hate you and love you at the same time.
Fabulous writing.

OH fuck, I'm nearly crying. THIS is beautiful. Utterly, tragically, completely BEAUTIFUL.

The ending of this literally knocked the wind out of my chest. I hate you, just the tiniest bit... but, it was a brilliant story.

God, that scene where John kept trying to replicate his photo-smile in the mirror, just about broke my heart...

Already within the first paragraphs I was unimaginably in love with this fanfiction. It is expertly written, and I am excited to read more!

You cock! You utter maniac. I can't believe I sat through this and thought it was ending okay what the actualfactualfuck?! I AM SO UPSET!

Ahem, this was a very good fic. Just um, fuck you. And I mean that in a very caring way.

Oh wow. SERIOUSLY?!
Dammit. You can't be. Why?!
Letting me think everything was going to be fine.
Yeah right. You know what, just .. GRAAARH! WHYYWHY!
(Sorry, but I mean, really. Why.)
That was a beautifully written fic, full of pain and pain and relieve and even more pain.
Your portray of the characters was pretty close to perfect and I enjoyed (if you want to call incoherent sobbing 'enjoy') every sentence.
Thanks for sharing this brilliant piece of work! (Though, was the end REALLY necessary?)

Okay have just reread this chapter and now I think it's time you declare the ending was a bad dream and now Lestrade shows up in time to save our intrepid heroes. ...Um...now please...or now...or now...I can go on indefinitely but you get the idea. Thanks for such a great story anyway.

Okay, great story. I am now going to pretend that I didn't read that last part and taa daa! our heroes save the day or get saved or something. You might consider writing an alternate ending for those of us who will. not. accept. this one. Ever. Period. Thanks I really enjoyed reading this.

I cried the whole bloody time! Sadest fanfiction ever!