Compelling story! I don't think I've read this one before. Good work!

You definitely left me guessing. Well done.

brilliantlyfunny

Ok, this fic was truly precious. I loved it. What I think that the plan to rile Jones up was there. Probably with plausible deniability in combination with a honest to God broken camera. That's why McGee had to come in, and why they only had this confession, without Dinozzo 'pressuring' Jones into a 'false' confession.

Hm, well this fic leaves you with a lot of questions. Personally, I choose to believe Tony was in fact making the stories of serial killing up, but that no one else knew about the plan. He was just mad because the man threatened Ziva and all. Though that doesn't make an angry Tony any less frightening, because his victim did end up in jail, exactly where he wanted him.

I really enjoyed reading this! Nice work!

Are you working on any new NCIS stories? I just re read this one and I am so amazed by your skill.

Holy Crackers! I hate the censorship on here sometimes, because crackers is not suitable for this. At All!
This was so dark and twisty and I could not love it more. I don't know what the answer is. It honestly could go either way. But Dexter Tony? Yeah, I can see it. Not sure I want to see it, but I can't look away either.
Amazing! xo

I have no idea if it was real or not...but the scary thing about Tony's character is that I could totally see him as a sociopath. He's almost too good at adopting various 'personas'.

Ooooooh, I hope you write more to this!
I love darkTony! He's so wonderful, and I think having him be a sociopath or psychopath would be so cool, liek Dexter, but Tony. :) I loved it.

Hi, Gibbs always knows ... hehe! Brilliant way to create some shudders between my shoulder blades!
It reminded me of the scene where Gibbs and Ducky "prepared" a suspect down in autopsy. This time it was up to Tony to go wild on the suspect. McGee probably didn't watch from the observation room, but Gibbs did!
And the evidence bag contained a fake. Of course!
Thanks and cheers!

whoa.

Wow, that was dark and totally awesome! The way he controlled his emotions and the way you described everything was phenomenal! Great job :)

God, that is an amazing piece of work! Made me think of Dexter!

What a fun story! :D
I love the Dark!Tony...
Things are not always what they seem on the surface.
Even if Tony isn't a serial killer.. there's nothing to say he isn't a psychopath.. ;)
Whatever happened to Brenda Bitner? or Jeanne? hmmmm? haha...
Good work!