wished this was longer! such a great read!

poor neal!

More, please. Please?

oh my freaking goodness. Wow, I am slightly stalking your list of works after reading something about the Fantastic four. And this touches my heart, ohhh what an awful thing to do to neal. I like you author very much ;). But really this is quite brilliant and creative :) thanks

um...i feel like there should be more to this...? please add another chapter?! :)

Great picture just have to wonder if you would ever expand the story into something more.

Hope you get better soon, Neal.

I absolutely loved this line: "Peter would fix this even if it meant picking up a brush and evolving his stick figures into Michelangelo's."

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Hey!

Just read the story - wow! I'd really love it to continue! I wanna know what happened exactly to poor Neal, how he's gonna handle it, how Peter's handling it...please go on )

Aw, this was good! I wish it continued. Poor Neal :( I hope you continue this-I'd like to see what happens later, or get more understanding of what actually happened to Neal.

Blessings!

~Fierce

This is really enticing and original. Please consider adding to it.

Very powerful.

I hope you give us more.

So very sad. I wish you would continue. To leave Neal like that is cruel ;-)

Very powerful (if sad) story.

And knowing Peter, he's going to do just what he thought about in the end (turn stick figures into Michelangelos) if needed, just to make Neal right again - or as close to that as possible.

I'm so glad he's there for his CI, like friends should be there for each other.

What a depressing but very well-written fic! That was a very creative way of telling a very imaginative story. And the result of Neal (at least for the moment) shunning his painting equipment was really heart-breaking. No wonder Peter was devastated by that realization. No matter how heartily he will deny it but Peter has become truly reliant on Neal's easy smile and charming attitude. I think it hurts him far more than he is willing to admit if someone who has a beef with Neal practically takes the essence of his being away, especially knowing how fiercely Neal adheres to his non-violence policy.