Reviews for Body Parts |
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![]() ![]() From "aww" to giggles to "woah"! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great one. You have our boys just right. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH WOW! that was AWESOME! I LOVED it! Loved how you made everything just WORK very well done... THANKS:"D |
![]() ![]() Nice. I really enjoyed reading this. My favourites are "Nose", "Fingers" and "Arms". Places like the one you described in "Nose" are wonderful and too rare. As for "Fingers", you did really good with describing a mind going a mile an minute and then finding an anchor. It was wonderful. The atmosphere in "Arms" is great. I can easily imagine the boys being so caring towards their landlady. And a protective John is a sight to behold. That was really something. My favourite parts of "Eyebrow" are the Yarders' surprise at John's sarcastic response to Sherlock, and the latter's surprise. It's nice to see an amazed Holmes. Thatk you so much for including a warning in "Eyes". Not all authors are so thoughtful. In "Calves" I find myself completely unable to imagine John in a dress. All in all, a really great piece of writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this and am hoping you might be inclined to delight us with more along the same lines...? In Nose, I loved the "appropriately tarnished bottom third of the door handle" and Sherlock wanting to share his new favourite restaurant experience with John. In Hand, I loved that John (typically) made sure Anderson was ok despite the injury to his own hand and despite no one else taking time out to check on the idiot. In Fingers, I didn't have any favourite bits because I love the whole thing from top to bottom! Legs made me ridiculously proud of John's fitness; Eyes would have scared me really bad if it wouldn't have been for your A/N at the beginning, so thanks much for that. Although I kind of hate feet I have managed to get used to Sherlock's remarkable ones over time and found Feet very amusing indeed. Eyebrow gave us the very clever side of John which is sometimes missed, and for that reason alone I really enjoyed it. Shoulder made me flinch and wince, and I do feel very sorry for poor, stoic John. Arms may have been my favourite, and not just for you making John vault over the banister and use the stolen ID. Thanks a lot, this was really excellent. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Don't be sorry for not splitting this up into chapters. It was nice to read on one page. Very nice work! 'Eyes' might be my favorite still but 'Calves' was a nice addition. ;) Thanks again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() My mindscape has no 's a whirl of everything and nothing. Deuced hard to describe accurately. I liked eyes and shoulder and arms ( I quite like arms especially Terrance Mann's (very shapely)). Especially the detail and the explanation. Well to be frank I like all of this story. It has abundance of meaning.- I like your style in this I can't explain it any other wary than the scenes you paint have pleasant texture. And I like when I can learn by reading. No , I rather love it dearly. Thank you for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the variety in this, and the different points of view. The sexy ones were great but I really like the fingers one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. I loved the arms one it was so sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely loved this story! I thoroughly enjoyed how the men interacted especially with 'Eyes', i thought that was wonderful. Thank you for writing this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() XD Lots of squees and giggles! Love it! Micky. x |
![]() ![]() ![]() found a typo in "hands" "He didn't like it when he had to rely on one had to do the job of two and it was so much easier to cope with his flatmates shenanigans when he was two handed."- rely on one haNd some of these i like, some of these i dont like. and i absolutely fail trying to imagine john in skirt and high heels, even if its just for a case... |