what a faggot

ah... this one had potential, I admit it.

*grabs microphone* Author come back~ oooooh, I need this in myyyyy liiiiiiiffffeeeee! Author come back. I can't wait for more. I'll read anything you post. *strikes dramatic pose and drops mic* I shall await your work with the patience of a shinto monk on the road to enlightenment.

Thank you for an enjoyable chapter.

Looking forward to the rewrite. I loved the first and second chapter. After those it seemed a little less descriptive so I’m guessing it hasn’t been rewritten. Good luck!

Nice premise and I hope someday you finish it, tho I don't think it'll ever be finished. But, if you do, for the love of God do not rehash the novels/movies with a dash of Harry. There is no need for Harry here if he does not influence the events. On one hand, the fic is barely starting, on the other, Harry had not done much.

It has a lot to offer. I like in the timeline where it is, even though it does it a little jumpy. The only thing that still bothers me is Harry's feelings toward the elves and Legolas. He still feels too inconsistent. He keeps swinging from being best bros with them to he can't trust them. To they are so kind and they take such good care of him to they are all arrogant and looking down on everyone. I am super curious about Harry's relationship with Elrond at the end there. Anyway, good luck with the rewrite. I think you really do have something here, it just needs a bit more polish.

Ok, I'm enjoying so far, but there was just something that bothered me and I just had to stop and make a comment before I continued reading. Harry's nearly instantly called the elves prissy and powerful. Why? All he knew at that moment is that they taught the ents how to talk and about other things. Also that the elves don't even know all the answers! How does that make them prissy? I know, you were just setting it up to make the comparison to Draco and how Harry has a type. But then he goes from never wanting to meet them for this prissy reason, to oh, he does want to meet them but he wants to steer clear of them because now they seem too powerful?! All I ask is try to keep Harry's feeling reasonable.

Gah! Please keep writing. The cliffhanger is killing me! Thank you for putting the time into writing this.

He said Salazar's sake! Is it because of his Slytherin side, or... something else? Because, from what I know, a Gryffindor worth his money would never use that name.

um are you going to make a new story for this or what

Great story

So happy you’ve decided to continue with this story! This pairing doesn’t get enough love in my opinion and this has a great set up so far! Can’t wait to see where this goes!

I'm looking forward to it!

Be continued?