I like the way you've fleshed out Luna's odd perceptiveness into a defined talent. I also like that McGonagall got called out for being a poor head of house. I do feel that the ending was rushed; having Albus die from a stroke with Riddle's plot for his resurrection being so trivially side stepped closed plot threads off too fast. Albus's manipulations as Riddle attempts to adapt could have made for an amusing crack flick. On the other hand, I understand that Luna's talent now that it is understood and controlled would likely make it rather a humor/crack story. The talent is very nearly overpowering for any kind of sustained conflict. Still, I think it would be a _really fun_ humor story if you had extended it out into several chapters. Explore what happens to the Greengrass family; let the Malfoy family face justice; do something amusing with Ron (the direction this story goes would exacerbate Ron's character flaws, not help him find redemption), while avoiding bashing too much of the rest of the Weasleys (overkill is no fun, but Percy and Molly probably cannot escape something).

I enjoyed this story.

IT may not have turned out how you wanted it but I loved it.

This was excellent! Loved all of the insanity around Luna - that was very unique and extremely well thought out (even if it did just appear). Glad to see that Harry had the support of his friends, especially Luna. Also glad to see a responsible adult make an appearance. Amelia did a fantastic job doing a run around of Dumbledore. So...did you do a sequel to this? I ship H/D and would be very interested in seeing one, especially if the quality of story is the same. Thanks!

This was awesome! Love Luna!

i love this luna :)

An excellent little story. I especially liked the way that Luna’s way of acting was explained.

Wow this is new

This is a great little story.

A cracking good story with a pleasant change to canon.

I like this ..

;-}

I really like it! Very original, the death of Albus was really a new experience like Minerva and Filius exit from school.

Like this is fanfiction you don’t have the real magical USA of JK wich is ver awful.
And she made sudamerica awful too. I don’t like her schools at all. Why sud america had only a dark school? It make no sense. The same for Africa

this was hilarious, and I loved every word.

Enjoyed your story!

Great story. Thanks for sharing it.