I detest villain Dumbledore. They don't quite work. Evil Dumbledore, however...

This one is a megalomaniac, and possible sociopath. He thinks he's a villain, but nope. If you get back to this I hope you bury him.

pretty nice thing Sirius did. wonder why he didn't just have him killed.

"If Voldemort was gone and the rest of the Death Eaters had been captured, then just why was Albus Dumbledore so keen to still protect Severus Snape?"

the word for world is 'fallguy'

Albie thinks he's a superhero! The Nile isn't just a river...

Did people have pockets in 1472? Or just the kind that you attach to your clothes? rather than in your clothes?

I do so hope you are well, and hope for an update to this wonderful story.

Absolutely brilliant, the first time travel story that makes sense and doesn't rehashes the books.
So, where's the rest?

Avada Kedavra is the incantation, NOT the name of the spell.

Sirius is fourteen years in past from the Battle of the Department of Mysteries. Harry was 15 months old when his parents were killed.

Snape's a Half-blood, not a Muggle-born. Unless that's one of the dimension's differences?

Just so you're aware, according to Ms. Rowling's timeline, Tonks (born between September 1, 1972 and August 31, 1973) should be eight or nine, and Draco (born on June 5, 1980) should be almost a year and a half.

Only Voldemort knows who ALL the Deah Eaters are. The Death Eaters only know who SOME of the others are (e.g. Death Eater A would know the identities of Death Eaters B-E, but not the identities oof Death Eaters F-Z).

Sirius returned to Grimnauld Place in 1995, and the Battle of the Department of Mysteries (Sirius' death) was in 1996. GoF covers the 1994-1995 school year, and OotP covers the 1995-1996 school year.

Actually, Harry and Dobby meet 11 years in the future. Also, I don't think House Elves live as long you have Kreature living here.

I'm enjoying this story so far. I do prefer a less *overtly* Evil Overlord Who Thinks He Is Good Dumbledore, but Sirius Black in Full Cunning Mode makes up for it. It's definitely enjoyable enough to follow, and see how it ends.

Damn. Sh!ts about to get Real.