Reviews for Story of the Ten Tailed Wolf |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hinata A cunt |
![]() ![]() Great storyline looking forward too more chapters |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't believe you made naruto pull a homer just thinking about ramen lol. this is the first fanfic I've read do that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your stories so much but...WHERE ARE ALL OF THE GODAMN LEMONS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() To be honest the story is just getting more and more ridiculous. The guy is 9 and has practically no experience in fighting at all and he just goes ahead and kills a kage like its the most natural thing to do. By 12 he could probably kill the Hokage. I was satisfied enough with that and then you had to turn him into a fucking half demon for no fucking reason and he just agrees to it with no explanation. It seems to me like you're not even putting any effort in writing this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, its quite shitty how you are forcing the plot to stay the same as the original. Is the whole story gonna be the same as anime/manga? with the exception of naruto thinking "If i got serious i could end this in a second" everyfight? Im already dissapointed because i'm sure thats how its gonna be |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update this is great |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally an author who understands that writing for the masses does not make for a good story in my opinion I like the way you take the Naruto universe and made it your own. I liked reading about Naruto as he was growing up. I've read crap wear he was screwing woman and ruling the world at 7 with the maturity of a 70 year old with no reason why he could be that mature. I like the way you kept the original Naruto's personality while keeping with your own version and it makes sense. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And at Hanyou I stopped reading. Otherwise the writing was good. I hope others enjoyed it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think they need privacy seals. otherwise they will have plenty of noise complaints in the near future |
![]() ![]() ![]() Those two are getting more blunt about their sex time has the story goes, how long until someone gets a nosebleed nobody except the author knows. |
![]() ![]() ![]() will you continue to work on this story line or is it discontinued? I find it very intriguing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have read a story with a naruto x fem. kyuubi on Wattpad but I think they restarted it because when I tried to read it again it was only on chapter 4 when it had over 30 before. |
![]() ![]() Good Chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great work I hope you will continue the story |