can't wait for the next chapter in this story

Not bad story too short for my taste I hope you plan to continue if not I wish you the best on whatever you do in the future thank you for at least trying I know your site is a joke so I don't blame you for not wanting to write on it I know I don't so thank you again

This story has so many elements I like, especially the fem haku x naruto and though I loved sasuke his death could change the course of narutos story. He wouldn't have to chase him everywhere no bromance and a lot less BS. Also it would add a much needed darker mood to the story seeing as how NINJA DIE and every decision counts. But I must say if u messed up I would say it was narutos reaction to the death, while yeah we all know he loves haku sasuke according to him was like a rival, and his Brother. I would have made naruto go kyuubi mode fight gaara (not enough to kill him) and has to be sealed by kakashi then when he wakes back up he is in the hospital with haku by his side sleeping. Also it would add more if naruto where to break down in front of haku making haku comfort him and give support in return deepening their relationship greatly. And with his deep love for haku, more than just oooh she sexy or I like how she acts it would utterly triumph over anything hinatta would do. Just think about it haku is the love of his life, she was there for him when he was I'll (beginning of story) and when he lost his brother (sasuke) she is also now his wife
Hinata she was (according to him) a strange odd weird sickly girl who was his classmate PS: she broke into his apt and attempted to beat haku the love of his life and also his wife at the time :(
If hinata wasnt so shy she could have probably changed what he thought of her, but its too late sorry hinata
But awesome story love super evil gaara UPDATE PLZ

Third time I'm stating this to a different writer, warn your future readers that you changed the gender of Haku, some of us liked the androgynous male that Haku was and represented, I wasted time clicking on this fic, I would never even glance at.

This is cool and I'm enjoying it but I'd love it if you could start telling us about the Jagon, where it came from, what it can do instead of or as well as the relationship stuff. It's cool what you've done with Sasuke and I look forward to how you manage to spin the rest of the story without him as hate or love him he is a main character.

UPDATE SOON! AMAZING STORY!

Great chapter please update soon

what happened to Mizuki's limiter seals?

and why did you have the Hokage ask Naruto and Haku If they slept together twice?

First time Haku says "No we did not make love yet" and that they'll have a baby when they both are ready.

Then immediately the next chapter, the Hokage asks the same question and gives the birds and the bees talk.

Lastly. The Eyes are called "Jagan" not "Jagon" though It is possible you changed their name on purpose.

Peace.

Interesting... Can't find in me to say any more than that. I'll look forward to further chapters.

First - Jagan. Not Jagon. Literally translates as "Evil Eye".
Second - Chuunin-level and below chakra reserves are incapable of creating and sustaining Shadow Clones. That's why it's in the Forbidden Scroll as a B-rank Kinjutsu, with the Tajuu Kage Bunshin (Mass Shadow Clone) as an A-rank variant, as a Jonin-level jutsu.
Third - Absolutely loved what the Eye did to Kurama. Fox is like the Uchiha in that it's too pride-filled for it's own good, thankfully it's not arrogant.
Fourth - Whether or not the aforementioned problems have been fixed in later chapters or not, I figured I'd at least mention them.

Very good story so far.

Wow!
Sasuke is dead and caused sakura mental break (she probably won't be kounichi anymore).
And what happen with tsunade?
Naruto should have senju DNA but how tsunade can't remember having a child?
What about kushina?

Love the rumor mill

Awesome beginning!

Man ouch Teme gets creamed by Gaara, that's gonna upset snake-face some and effect a lot of people in Konoha, anyways keep up the great work!