The End already? Augh.

What happened then? Was the red flower or the water some kind of antidote?

Well, duh, that was a marriage.

Wait, is Malak following her into the Maze?

Wait, isn't this the story that hasn't been touched in years?

At least Jess understands the concept of a metaphor, unlike some girls I know in real life.

Would Jess seriously consider losing her temper simply because Malak doesn't want her sucking him off, especially after all the pleasure he just gave her?!

Oh great, the thugs can't take a joke. You merely break one's neck and the rest just have to start blowing things up.

Wait, so these are all "criminal Yautja", as the clans hunt them?

Awesome story, so far! Love it!

Wow, Fast update. Amazing chapters! One of the best couple I ever seen, I'm happy that all went well, maybe the next baby will be a male :) great story!

You just took me somewhere. I'm not coming back either, this was so delicious.

Exciting and teasing chapter, but even lovely! And now? What is happening! Can't wait to read more!

Well, so much for the Stockholm Syndrome.

"No match for human power"? You mean a human can beat any predator in hand-to-hand combat?

"Illegal" to who? Is there a galactic law the Predator race passed banning this practice?

Is cross-breeding possible in your story?

I guess if human females can find Turians (Like Garrus) attractive, then maybe they can in fact find Yautja attractive too.

What's a "fark"?

For a girl that's tied down, Jess sure seems able to move around a lot.

Either the gas or the food must be loaded with some kind of artificial aphrodisiac...

Uh, won't the Pred ever wake up?

Why did the others interrupt the session? What's going on?

Ooh, this story sure has potential...

I am looking forward to reading the rest.

write more soon

I wonder if Jess will still have affections for Malak

Well nice chapter, and update soon plz