as complex as Japanese is it is amazing that 5 year olds can speak half as well as Naruto and his friends. :P

Please fix Naruto’s grammar. By his age and with him constantly being taught by adults, his grammar should not be so horrendous. Please tell me what chapter he starts talking like normal and not like an idiot.

Thank you very much. I love this storry. It is one of the best I have ever read.

Best story ever and a hearrwarming farewell too.

Okay so I’ll be honest, I was skeptical about this story when I read the first few chapters. After all, Naruto is a rather hard character to write, especially as a child. But you’ve done an amazing job with him! You’ve avoided the angst that people usually throw around his childhood and traded it for a hard working, ninja minded character. It’s rather refreshing and quite well written. I hope the rest of the story is just as good as the beginning.

I understand this is from 2011, but it could do with a second pass. Sentence structure is a bit difficult to read as it's not broken up enough.

Dang this story is superb! I was hook. Shame it had to end tho. Kudos to many more narutoverse story.

This was an awesome story. I’m kind of sad it’s not being continued further, but at the same time, I totally understand why you don’t want it to start degrading. I’ve seen that happen to other stories and it’s never pretty.
Anyway, thanks for writing this; it’s been a blast to read. I probably should have been doing homework yesterday, but instead was reading this. Basically the entire day.

Tbh, he should've picked up the basics of the language at this point. He was living in an orphanage which would give him more time to talk and listen to people. He's been reading a lot and helping the hokage with paperworks. Hell, he could've had an advance proficiency at this point and it wouldn't be surprising.

So, what? You just abandoned this instead? What a joke.

Hi there, I love your brain. I suppose your IQ must be through the roof to come up with this multi-faceted, singularly unique AU. It's extraordinary. You're extraordinary. Hope you keep writing.
- a fan

just a thought. since this is Fire country there would be no snow. its climate would be more Mediterranean or Caribbean weather. in winter it would be rain lots of it not snow. Also Naruto saw a snow for the first time in Snow country in the Anime.
I am not complaining just pointing out what would happen. But I love the story so far. its in depth insight into things that a lot of authors ignore is quite refreshing.

if its rin-

Having read this whole story in under a week all I can say is that its incredibly well put together. Truly a worth while read

Just so you know, imouto means little sister, not little brother. That would be otouto