This is a nice story, although you should rate it T, because there was no reason to rate it M, and that mature rating will probably scare off some potential readers.
It also bugged me that you kept referring to John as "Dr. John." Someone like Donovan would most likely refer to him as "Dr. Watson" or even just "John" but using his title and first name sound awkward and made me cringe every time I saw it.
That's just a pet peeve of mine, though, and other than that I truly enjoyed your story, as you did a nice job of keeping them in character despite behaving a little unusually (if that makes sense)

Hi, Loving your series of one shots and this is probably the millionth time I've read it because it is that good when I realised that you have a very small spelling error in the sentence below:

The Pool - Sally always thought of the incident with capital letters - had at least shown her that Dr John was not the doormat she "pad" suspected he was.

I've marked it with quotations and thought you might like to change although I only just noticed it then.

I love this series of stories. And they Greek Mythology reference is awesome. Very nice. Thanks for a good read.

Another good one, I would love to see your version of what happened at the pool to leave them like that :)

Ahhahahaha - that last line made me laugh. Very good fic.

It's interesting to see John and Sherlock's platonic and non romantic relationship from Sally's POV

LOL...Poor John...OUHIES!

thanks:"D

You really are an excellent writer, knowledgable as well. The reference to the birth of Athena was interesting, I wouldn't have normally thought of Sherlock Holmes and Greek mythology but it does work. Anyway, this is a wonderful oneshot.

Please write anther story in which John uses the Voice to bring calm to chaos, I like the Voice and the Look, they make people behave. Maybe a story in which Maycroft says thank the queen, hes not in politics.

thanks,

Jade

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Poor John. And a rather interesting way of them keeping in communication.

That was so adorable, and I loved the comments from Donovan all the way through. Really well written; I loved it! :)

Soo cute x3 Anderson's view point was great, Sherlock is adorable to John x3

omg so awesome! Donovan NEEDS to take a vow of celibacy; she should never procreate!

This is a great story!