Reviews for The Heart In The Whole |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was... Amazing! I love the story! Like the build up and the plot was great! I absolutely loved it! |
![]() ![]() I loved it! Thank you for writing it ️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, Such a beautiful story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() When I read a story that has been done for a long time I normally refrain from gushing or Critiquing what ever aspect jumped out at me. But for you and for this story I really can’t help myself. I adore this story. I love Johnlock, but most writers don’t handle the two of them as a couple well. You are one of the more notable exceptions. Both of our boys at Baker Street are very in character and were put into the intimacy realistically. I guess I had resigned myself to the total twisting of their characters to facilitate a romantic relationship that your story grabbed me by the lapels and threw me into a wall. Not that Sherlock or John is exactly like cannon because in cannon Johnlock is, while feasible, not exactly in character. No the twisting is subtle and logical, not sudden and in taking of liberties. Sherlock is still Sherlock in your story his intellect is still there he is still sarcastic, cutting, he insults Anderson and Donovan in a biting way, insensitive, and careless of the feelings of others, he is all those things but he in your story so devoted to John that he makes an effort to apologize to Sally for his verbal slapping. that he softens himself to please John but still being himself is so beautiful to me. (if any of that makes sense good for you you have more deductive reasoning than most of my family) (oh- - and thank you if you are still reading my rant on how perfect John and Sherlock are done in your story) (: Ahyhoo Have a good day James May the Three Friends smile upon your path L -L |
![]() ![]() ![]() my heart! |
![]() ![]() Amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely loved this! That's all I need to say. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for a great story. Really enjoyed. |
![]() ![]() Wowwww! I enjoyed this so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really did like the setup, but the story felt very repetitive and quite stagnant, like it was physically unable to move forward. |
![]() ![]() ![]() best story i have ever read on . hope you become an amazing author one day! xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() They're the cutest couple ever! I absolutely loved everything about this story! All the build up,the sad parts,the action parts,the sappy parts and everything in between! thank you for writing this! it was absolutely amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this so much. Thank you for being such a good writer. I have tried to write stories of blind Sherlock but I just can't seem to get anything right. But this has given me some inspiration. thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the story! I think this is one of my favorites of yours! Thanks for feeding my new addiction of all things Sherlock! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the story! I'm terrible at reviewing each chapter, since i copy and paste each chapter to an app which in turn reads it out loud for me while I'm at work. So i always find lines in the chapter that i love, only i never go back to find them. But this blurb is so spot on with how i see their characters, i just wanted to make sure you knew how much I loved it! Almost all activity amongst the surrounding officers seemed to be on hold and Sherlock glanced up. "Your area, John," he said, waving his arm towards Sally. John was surprised. His area? Was Sherlock leaving the decision as to whether they 'went public' to him? "I don't think that's any of your business," he told Sally, to the rumbling discontent of the crowd around them. "Shut up!" demanded Sherlock. "I can't think over all this speculation." Brilliant! |