Adorabubble. I loved it.

Aw... that was so immensely cute *wipes away tear*

I'm sorry for not reviewing the past few chapters... It wasn't because they weren't good or interesting, I promise! It was more because you left them on horrible cliffies and I just had to read on right away :3.

I really, really loved this story, and I really like your writing. All I can say is keep up the good work!

Maddy

:O

Aw... I do, too :).
And the Frex scene was just... terrifying :O. I HATE THAT MAN. I really do. But I love this story.

Maddy

LOL that was so funny :D. Poor Elphie... I would be mortified if I blurted something like that out in front of everyone xD.
Speaking of which... Me and my high school friend, a few years ago, we were really silly, and we made up this thing about us supposedly being in a sexual relationship and having sex in the janitor's closet every now and then... don't ask, we were bored in class :P so one day we were joking about that in class, and she said something about us being in a relationship, and I said just a little bit too loudly, 'Yes, a séxual relationship!' and just at that moment, the entire class fell silent and everyone was staring at us, and my friend pretty much died with laughter. So did I, by the way :P. Ah well, they already thought we were crazy anyway :P.

And I'm totally off topic here. Sorry :3. Pretend you didn't read that. I loved this chapter, and I'm quickly going to read on now.

Maddy

EISSA. *murderous look*
I loved this chapter... though it's mean of you to keep them in the dark about each other's feelings :(. I suppose that that will be solved soon enough, though. :)

Maddy

STOP SAYING IT SUCKS. Your writing doesn't suck. Ever. Not so far, anyway. So stop saying it.
You're a really great writer, and I love your Fiyeraba moments.

Maddy

*throws fruit* WHY DIDN'T YOU MAKE THEM KISS
No, kidding of course :P. On the contrary - I like that you're taking it slow with this story, instead of just having Elphie and Fiyero meet and fall in love almost immediately.

Maddy

Awww... Fiyeraba love! :D
I wonder if she's going to punch him in the next chapter.
:P No just kidding. I loved this... but I wasn't for even a clock-tick thinking that it was over. I'm curious to see what will happen, though.

Maddy

Go Glinda! I like this new G(a)linda :). And I like Fiyeraba, too :D. Keep it going!
Maddy

Aw... Fiyeraba fluffles! :D Love it!

Maddy

I LOVE MALTEASERS *whoot*
Yeah, I said I went to prepare for my exam... I did, but I had ten minutes left, so I read another chapter :3. And I loved it! Though I think Galinda is a little mean right now *scowl*.
Anyway... Now I really do have to go :3.

Maddy

Mwahaha. Serves him well for breaking her laptop. If someone broke my laptop, I'd kill him. KILL HIM. AAAAAH.
But perhaps I might be the tiniest little bit too addicted to my laptop.
Anyway, I love to see where this is going... I have to go now, exam in a few hours :( but I'm going to read on once I get back!
And I saw that you started reading and reviewing one of my stories, Made to be broken - thank you so much! Means the world to me :).

Maddy

hahah Fiyero getting caught was hilarious!

you know you claim this is your worst chapter but I really like it. Especially the running, it shows Elphaba coming out of her shell and learning how to be free...if that makes sense?