Oh my. I've. Found. A. Gem. And a shame for those who didn't. So a big thank you for sharing.

I really appreciate this.

Wow - backstory - character development - male bonding - what a terrific filler between eps!

Nice. :) I like it!

Loved the friendship moment at the end and the last line :)

I liked how you fit the phone to your version of Harry

Glad Sherlock got John to listen to him

Great friendship here, you had Sherlock's response be very much in character

I liked the last line quite a lot

A very well-written, touching story. I love the way you write their friendship, and the characterizations are all on point. Great story, overall!

Good balance with Sherlock showing he cares while still being Sherlock.

Very touching story.

I'm going to have to disagree with Dr Watson. Sounds like pneumococcal pneumonia to me, but I would have to verify with the rest of the exam and full vitals.

I'm sure I'm an idiot and missed this in the story but... what was John diagnoses? Otherwise, I love this story and think your characterization was spot on!

this was a lovely story. i love seeing sherlock care. he gets so flustered and confused on what he's meant to do. i just love it so very very much. You did a fantastic job on this, really capturing the characters and the emotions well. Nicely done!

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