Reviews for Underneath My Being is a Road that Disappeared
Guest chapter 2 . 12/14/2019
The constant belittling of Brennan for using medical terminology always made me see red. It's like getting mad at someone for using British terms on a trip in the US or vice versa... its not a distancing mechanic, its just her natural colloquialisms.
Pha1ange5 chapter 9 . 12/28/2018
I know you wrote this a long time ago, but I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed reading this collection of stories. I liked reading your take on how B&B would have handled a pregnancy early in their official relationship and I found you characterized them really well.
Anibal704 chapter 4 . 12/8/2018
So she’s definitely planning on them being together next year, huh? Oh Brennan, give it up already, you’re hopelessly in love!
angeliena chapter 9 . 10/14/2015
Love your story and style of writing!

Thank you!
Bones2014 chapter 9 . 5/3/2015
Nothing wrong with a little fluff. I love the fluff:) And thanks for blessing us with the birth of baby Booth. I love that humor ensued. The witty banter that I love continued. I have really enjoyed this story, so so much. As with all great stories, I hate to see it end, but so glad I got to go on the ride. You are an extremely talented writer. I'm so glad I discovered your stories. Now, on to the rest. Thanks once again for sharing your gift with us readers.
Bones2014 chapter 8 . 5/3/2015
Oh wow, this was perfect. I loved the humor. That's a big part of who they are & what I love about them...the banter. And ureka...Brennan finally came to the realization that the feeling she has for Booth is love. She loves him:) Lucky woman! As are you...blessed as you are with the gift of writing, great writing:)
Bones2014 chapter 7 . 5/3/2015
Booth has his hands full. Even pregnant, she's as stubborn as ever. The feels when he was shot. How panicked she felt thinking back to the lady time. Who could blame her. Thank God she has the support of her team/friends. Still amazed at the spot on depiction of these characters.
Bones2014 chapter 6 . 5/3/2015
I love this chapter. It had a bit of everything. When Parker some Booth up & saw Brennan's breasts...I thought I was going to die laughing. I could picture Booth's reaction. Then the conversation they had in the kitchen...typical Booth. Brennan's panic. Booth's panic. The way he understands her better than she understands herself. The love they all share. Perfect chapter.
Bones2014 chapter 5 . 5/3/2015
I am so glad I found your stories. I love them. I know how annoying it must be that I keep repeating myself but, reading your stories is like watching them on screen. You write them perfectly & with such intense emotion. I feel what you write. Absolutely amazing! This last scene was perfect...his apology...her ability to understand him even though she cannot figure out anyone else...the comfort they provide to one another. The knowledge that if they have each other, they might be able to survive whatever is thrown their way. Perfection:)
Bones2014 chapter 4 . 5/3/2015
I imagine it is extremely difficult emotionaly dealing with the bodies of children. I could understand Booth's need to have contact with his son to help alay the horror of it, to assure him that there is still goodness in the world. That's something that even Brennan can understand, becoming the fierce momma bear. And her present is precious. Quiet times between them like you've written about here at the end are priceless.
Bones2014 chapter 3 . 5/3/2015
Still so them:) I loved the exchange with Angela. It's always fun that Angela & Booth know Brennan so well. And Brennan is trying. She wants this to work as much as Booth does. And so the experiment of cohabitation begins. This should be enlightening. I'm enjoying this do much.
Bones2014 chapter 2 . 5/2/2015
Oh yes, they are so them in your stories. I love the banter. It has always been the trait I love most between these two. And yes, once again, you nailed it. Max does know & love his daughter. I have to give him that. And like Max, I believe this pregnancy is going to be a constant roller coaster ride for these two:)
Bones2014 chapter 1 . 5/2/2015
Poor Brennan. Something she said she would never do. Poor Booth, attacked by his coworkers. It still amazes me how perfectly you capture not just Booth & Brennan, but all of the Bones characters. Absolute perfection. It's as though I'm watching your stories come to life on screen:)
dgschneider chapter 9 . 6/7/2014
Thank you for such a beautiful story - great from beginning to end :)
dgschneider chapter 3 . 6/6/2014
I love this story...the characters are just beautifully written. Their dialogue and descriptions so real that reading it is like watching it play out in my head. I love the balance you have between their conflicts and concerns and their moments of love and devotion, very real to me. I prefer that balance that is so real to life than stories that are too fluffy and perfect. Makes me feel better about my own imperfect life I suppose. :) I know this story was from some time ago but just had to let you know how much I am enjoying it today. Thank you!
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