Reviews for The Offensive of Charm and Fire |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It has been years since you wrote this and you probably don't even look at reviews anymore but I just found your works and they are incredible. Thank you for sharing them |
![]() ![]() ![]() so good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww. This is brilliant! Especially the last part! Oh - I just love you for writing this! It was wrapped up perfectly :heart: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your choice of words were AMAZING. I LOVED THIS STORY. |
![]() ![]() ![]() D'awwww. Romantic!arsonist!Holmes ftw. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. My. Goooooooodnessssss. I'm sitting in math class ('cause I like my tuition money to go to quality things such as the reading of homosexual fanfiction ;D), and trying so hard not to just squeal. SO CUTE. The end is just agsiflahshdkdn perfection. So in character, it seems to me. I absolutely adore this pairing, and I love where you've taken them in this story. Fantastic, excellent, awesome, amazing job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wandered in through Lawliet's Angel's favourites (specializing on Sherlock, the new series) and the promise of more Holmes & Watson fun. :) I particularly liked your use of exotically formal/old and "stiff" English throughout the story, including in dialogue. Stuff like "cast terrible aspersions upon his character" (giggled out loud at that), "wherefore" and "nonce" that you don't run into a whole lot any more. It really adds to the atmosphere. I found it a bit confusing when Holmes called Watson "my dear boy" - while "old boy" clearly has the meaning of "good fellow", 'dear boy' sounds more like something you'd say to a considerably younger man. Do they have that much of an age difference? The dumpage of admission on Watson was wonderful and blunt and his "are you experimenting on me" reaction was sweet. Heart. Thanks for this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely! Particularly the ending. :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow I loved that! Great Story! It was so cute! |
![]() ![]() This is just amazing. I absolutely loved it, and your vocabulary and sense of direction, characterization and classic style just made my night. Wow! I tip my hat off to you, my dear. |
![]() ![]() ![]() All of the other slash fanfiction that I've read up to this point (which is alot more than expected from a human being) were all definantly slash fanfiction, but this, this was litterature, I could study this with great interest in an L.A. class. It could teach people correctional use of words, as well as new ones cause god knows what their vocabulary is missing, You harmonized the written word and a vivid passionate scene, and for that I not only congradulate you but salute you in your efforts, and success. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww. This is so sweet in a complicated Holmesian way! Of course Sherlock, love, and mild arson go together. I love your diction and style (for instance, your use of the word 'pernicious'), and this interpretation of Holmes and Watson's characters made me smile. Thanks for writing and posting! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! 3 |
![]() ![]() Seriously amazing story. Spent lots of time looking up words! |