Reviews for Help Me |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! I just wanted to say that I enjoyed this story and thank you for writing it! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it! no one was ooc and it was very well written. keep it up! pepperony forever! |
![]() ![]() Why can't Tony just have the shrapnels in his body surgically removed so he would no longer need the arc reactor in his chest? Furthermore, if the AR is poisoning him, can't he just take it out of his body but physically still have it connected to him like during his time in the cave? I don't understand why you had to make this so complicated |
![]() ![]() To be perfectly honest, I have never understood why Stark would die of palladium poisoning. He has an electromagnet in his chest, and that can be powered by any kind of electricity. Yes, an arc reactor would give a huge amount of mobility, but honestly, is it that hard to plug yourself into the wall socket for a detox? That plot device is sort of ridiculous. No offense to your fic, I was just ranting at Marvel for being silly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoyed this! |
![]() ![]() It's a great story so far, but it ruins the chapter (always does for me) when the author uses YOU'RE instead of YOUR. Ugh, sorry it's a pet peeve of mine. Basically in that line you are saying, 'You are...you are arc reactor?' when it should read 'Your...your arc reactor?'. So many authors make this mistake and it is absolutely stupid (I am not saying you or your writing is stupid). It just really bugs me. I look forward to reading the rest. |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO! In he movie she managed to be the Stark CEO and his girlfriend just fine' |
![]() ![]() Loved Tony's letter to Pepper. Now I'm off to read the sequel. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the story, kept me on my toes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this so much! Kickass job. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love the happy ending |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank god...it's about time we loyal readers got our kiss...long overdue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh come on...now you're just torturing us...Tony needs to just grab her and kiss her |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh you tease...you just love leaving us with cliffhangers...so glad pepper finally admitted her feelings |