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MewWinx96 chapter 15 . 11/15/2018 Hi! I just wanted to say that I enjoyed this story and thank you for writing it! :) |
NaLutrash14 chapter 1 . 3/11/2018 loved it! no one was ooc and it was very well written. keep it up! pepperony forever! |
Guest chapter 8 . 7/14/2017 Why can't Tony just have the shrapnels in his body surgically removed so he would no longer need the arc reactor in his chest? Furthermore, if the AR is poisoning him, can't he just take it out of his body but physically still have it connected to him like during his time in the cave? I don't understand why you had to make this so complicated |
Guest chapter 5 . 10/11/2016 To be perfectly honest, I have never understood why Stark would die of palladium poisoning. He has an electromagnet in his chest, and that can be powered by any kind of electricity. Yes, an arc reactor would give a huge amount of mobility, but honestly, is it that hard to plug yourself into the wall socket for a detox? That plot device is sort of ridiculous. No offense to your fic, I was just ranting at Marvel for being silly. |
FriendLey chapter 15 . 8/26/2016 Really enjoyed this! |
TheNamelessOne chapter 2 . 12/12/2015 It's a great story so far, but it ruins the chapter (always does for me) when the author uses YOU'RE instead of YOUR. Ugh, sorry it's a pet peeve of mine. Basically in that line you are saying, 'You are...you are arc reactor?' when it should read 'Your...your arc reactor?'. So many authors make this mistake and it is absolutely stupid (I am not saying you or your writing is stupid). It just really bugs me. I look forward to reading the rest. |
Houndini chapter 13 . 9/4/2015 NO! In he movie she managed to be the Stark CEO and his girlfriend just fine' |
Tithi chapter 12 . 9/4/2015 Loved Tony's letter to Pepper. Now I'm off to read the sequel. :) |
aem91 chapter 15 . 2/23/2015 Loved the story, kept me on my toes. |
GlOmP3R chapter 15 . 10/28/2014 Loved this so much! Kickass job. |
LokiLove24028 chapter 10 . 9/22/2014 Type your review for this chapter here... |
nancyozz chapter 14 . 8/30/2014 Love the happy ending |
nancyozz chapter 13 . 8/30/2014 Thank god...it's about time we loyal readers got our kiss...long overdue |
nancyozz chapter 12 . 8/30/2014 Oh come on...now you're just torturing us...Tony needs to just grab her and kiss her |
nancyozz chapter 11 . 8/30/2014 Oh you tease...you just love leaving us with cliffhangers...so glad pepper finally admitted her feelings |