i like that moment in the end with Hiccup writing the book. Also, I applaud you on your clean dialogue. it's very clear who is speaking at all times, something that I will admit I have trouble with myself. I was terrified when I thought you had killed off Toothless though. Like, literally, I was considering taking back every good review I'd written on this story but then I saw that he was alive, so phew. As a whole, a very well rounded story. A few things to work on with spelling and punctuation, but as far as dialogue, continuity, plot, and vocabulary, this story is very well done. Gripping cliffhangers and perfect chapter titles. Give yourself a pat on the back for this job well done, my friend. And make good use of that comma key in future :)

I totally understand writer's block, my friend. Aside from my usual nit picking about commas, I really like your chapter titles. They are descriptive and gripping, but still leave enough to mystery that I want to see what the whole business is about.

Oh no, not another one! COMMAS! commacommacommacommacomma,,,,,,,,,,,
sorry, sorry, sorry, you're probably getting tired of me pointing that out. Aside from lack of punctuation, this is a very good story and each chapter has me looking forward to the next.

Oh no, Hiccup! What will happen next? You seemed to get Ruff and Tuff mixed up a few times. Also, your dialogue was very clear, good job, but MORE COMMAS PERSON! Sorry, that always gets me.

YIKES! Aw, poor Hiccup...And yet I love putting/seeing him in situations like this. :P

SWEEEEET!

YAY, sooooooooooooo much longer THANK THOR

Awww!

Oh no! WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT! AND DOES YOUR KEYBOARD HAVE A COMMA KEY?

Aww, i like Hiccup being comforted. I think collapsed sounds more manly than fainted though, that seemes more like something Gobber would say.

I love that quote. Nice callback to the original story, although I'm sure that you know Astrid's dragon is named Stormfly by now. A little bit more action here, very nice. Wheew, there are a lot of chapters to review. Well, here goes.

Aww, sweet scene with Hiccup and Toothless. Not much plot but a lot of feels. I wish the chapters were a little longer but oh well, I have problems with length myself. I am enjoying reading this story! Good work dragonprotector! OK, now let's see if chapter 4 is as good as the rest of them.

Again, more commas. Pretty good though. I like the tender moments between the two of them, although I wish there were more dialogue. So just some work on dialogue and punctuation, other than that great work. Onto chapter 3..

Ooh, me likey. Starting off with a bang for sure. Preferably longer chapters, and more commas. Other than that great start! :)

It's "in case". "Encase" means to cover.