FANTASTIC ! I miss McNozzo...

Really like this. I like the dangerous Tony and Vance has figure out he underestimated Tony. And I really enjoyed Ziva and Tony's interactions. And Vance's understanding of their interactions. I don't know if you mean for this to be a slight Tiva moment in the fic, but it was super interesting. And I hope to read an expansion of it whenever you get the chance or want to do.
McGee is so adorable of course Tony would go and try to help Sarah! Sarah McGee sister and important to him and McGee is important to Tony which makes Sarah important to Tony. Duh Mr. MIT & John Hopkins. Lol Probie indeed.

Love your spin on Tony and Ziva, and Vance's... awareness.

I love the how Vance is a witness to DiNozzo's actions of loyalty and fierceness toward his friends and family! Great shot!

Great story.

love it

Doesn't fit right to me. Once again they are all out together and apparently Tony is left out again. At first Tim is mad that Tony saved his sister, and at the end he has no clue that Tony thinks of him as his best friend.

Too out of character for all of them. Ziva was way out in left field. And Vance descriptions of Tony didn't make any sense.

Sorry, this just didn't do it for me, left me with more questions than any satisfaction.

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Way to go Tony! How come the others don't see things this easily and Tony or Gibbs or Ducky have to point it out?
I expect nothing less from Tony- he knows what's important. Good job!

Your summary said that this was about the friendship between Tony and Tim, but aside from the last line, it was basically nauseatingly TIVA. It could have been a really good story without that, and could really use a TIVA warning. It would have been brilliant if you had concentrated more on Tony and Tim, and Sarah, and how they felt about the events of the night instead of turning it into a TIVA vehicle.

Nice job very nice ..

i belive that tony sometime get a little to much credit, like saveing ziva, tim did as much if not more then tony. i like the story.

i belive the whole team is a little bit crazy, ziva you know is a killer so gibbs, tony hids i better but he is, so tim, hell the whole revenge thing for ziva, they left country to kill people off, tim stand there why a bomb is going to go off, they all crazy, some said they are a pack

this is a really good tony and tim friendship fic. thanks for sharing this with everyone!

what did tony tell ziva in italian ?! i didnt understand.

nice story. loved it.

Very well written.