Poor Jack. Which doctor is this by the way. 10, 11 or 12?

I love Jack and I love your writing and this was awesome! XD

I love this story. I love how you write dialogue for Jack. It is just spot on. And I love how you do the new doctor.

Well done. Short. To the point. Loved it.

I'm assuming this is the newest Doctor. I can easily see Jack and the Doctor having this conversation, and that it would frustrate Jack. Makes me wonder, though, whether there's more story to be written.

Keep writing!