Wow. This story was amazing! So emotional, sensual, perfect. So them. I could see this scenario playing out. And loved how they could communicate their feelings with next to no dialogue. Perfection.

Very cute and well written.

Sometimes subtle is hotter than blatant. That was lovely and very hot. :)

i loved:)

Beautiful, both regarding content and style. Thank you.

I don't like pieces without dialogues.

But you made it work.

I've fallen for your stories ;)

THIS IS HOW IT SHOULD HAPPEN AMAZING

Awesome! This was such a beautiful story. I love that what actually happened was a combination of what they both imagined. Amazing job.

Dial the damn number women! :) Great story!

WOW.

What an amazing story! You did a brilliant job of bringing everything together in 3 short chapters. Absolutely brilliant the way you shared each of their POVs and that each was actually the same. Gordon-Gordon was right: they are not opposites. They are the two halves of the same whole.

We done. Great start. Can't wait to read the rest.

lovely, lovely, lovely stuff. very romantic, very unfolding, very warm. excellent work.

thanks for writing!

Just found this story and wanted to let you know for your first time writing this type of fiction it was very good. The love scene was written perfectly to fit the tone of the story.

Wonderful!