That really did get dark

Awwwwwww! Thats the cute'st thing I've ever seen! Woot!

I like reading dark stories so thanks for writing this

It was a good story. And I think the ending made sense and worked taking in that conversation between Al & Mustang that Ed overheard as a cat.

Wow! What a story. I hope to find more stories you wrote now. I loved your plot and it was a great way to end the tale with the two of them finding thier happyness together. Keep writing I love reading your work.

AW! O

I liked the story, especially the idea of Edward's transformation. It was ingenious! I have some pointers for you though. I think during the rape scene, you should have used more imagery, particularly describing the rapist. an example would be: "The foul stench alone eminating from the man brought tears to Ed's eyes and Made Edward struggle that much more." This strenghten's the rape because during rape, one generally becomes more aware of the rapist then they normally would be. Also, I think you should have made Edward yell more. Even if he was a cat and became easily annoyed with his own meows, he would have still been a very loud in his head because a person is always themselves in thier head. Other than that, you did a really good job D

I wanted to cry for poor Ed... then for Roy... and then I wanted to congratulate him for going after what he wanted!

It was sad, but it was incredible!

hmm...never would have thought of edxroy but now i quite like it. *evil grin* hehe.

I'm so glad you added the happy love scene at the end!

Thank you!

Adoringly yours,

Sara Maxine

Mustang to the rescue!

Yay.

oh my.

you are twisted.

now the question is: will roy come to the rescue?

Okay, if this was your darkest, we're cool.

Okay, so far I've seen worse.

Let's hope that doesn't change...

Eep.

now i'm almost afraid to keep reading...

Nope, remembered fic from hell, fear sensors just shut up and died again.

Onward!