Reviews for Cold |
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![]() ![]() Amazing job! This is WAY better than I could ever do!... I loved it! |
![]() ![]() Fantastic story. I adore how you play and write the characters. Especially how you show the friendship and protective nature they have over each other. |
![]() ![]() Kudos for a job well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful |
![]() ![]() Beautifully written. |
![]() ![]() wonderful story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow I loved this! We are so sadistic! But we love it! Jahahaha! Thx for sharing! Unique idea! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh my gosh! literally I swear you just spoke to my heart and matched all my cravings. Geez, the schmoop! Oh my goodness, so well written, you were vague without being confusing throughout all your flashbacks. I really enjoyed reading this story, the descriptions were excellent :). Though I would have possibly liked a little more comfort :). But go Ben :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your writing is fantastic, I'm so happy to have discovered you :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great fic! :D |
![]() ![]() Bravo! There is simply not enough good Johnny hurt/comfort out there. This was very well done! |
![]() ![]() GREAT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story. I'd love to see it flushed out more, maybe making it into 3-4 chapters instead of just one. It's a great idea it and was overall well writen it just seemed a bit rushed. Hope you continue to write Fantastic Four. Wildfire |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool! Pretty good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! Thoroughly enjoyed this! Can never get enough Johnny angst, it's just far too fun! I love the prolonged angst of him not being able to sleep too because that really is torture. Very fun! Hope you write more! |