Very well done. I didn't like how Mia's help was skimmed over in the book. She saved Rose's life by using the aquarium water to distract Isaiah. Without her help Isaiah would have likely killed Rose instead, then he would have gone on with his plans.

I'm glad for Mia and Eddie to have this romance.

I really like that you're developing this story a bit more. I do like the longer one-shots because you really take time and fill them in with good details.

I loved the story and I'm sad that it was only a oneshot...
But still great chapter

sooo sweet! luved it!

xoxoxo

gopher :)

ahh love Eddie and Mia together.

Aw, this is so sweet! They're so cute together.

More please! :)

awwwww thats sooo cute! XDDD i love it!

Wow ! Love this story - hope you'll carry on!

Find it really frustrating that theres so little stories about these two as their one of my favourites. So very well done ;-)

xoxo K.

p.s. realy like your style of writing - has a really nice flow to it ...

I do enjoy this story. Tis indeed wonderful.

aw

this is so sweet

is it over?

awesome job! cannot wait till you right more!

Holy crap, point me in the direction of more Eddie fic! This was delicious, I love to think that while everyone was off being "save the world time dundundundun" that Eddie got a little action ;) I like seeing your version of Mia as changed and developed, and less "hish school" everyone seems to make her. Also, the scene from Shadow Kissed from a different POV so we can see the weirdness of Rose getting angry from a realistic perspective. Loved this in general!

That was so sweet! :) Awe! I liked rfeading in Mia's POV it was fun to see what she thought of Rose!

wow lol thats awesome