Reviews for Paradise with a Twist
babyblue44 chapter 19 . 2/19/2010
Wow its really good. please update soon 3 :)
babyblue44 chapter 2 . 2/19/2010
good.
angelunderthesun chapter 19 . 10/1/2009
i still have questions...is there a sequel?

what ahppened to dash and noelle?

what did noelle tell ivy to be kicked out?

great story tho...i love it!
fanfictionfan4ever chapter 19 . 9/13/2009
Loved it!
luvin'stuff chapter 19 . 5/18/2009
Hey, this story's marked as complete, is it?
irrevocably ives chapter 19 . 4/7/2009
wow.. okay. Seriously liking (sp?) your story! Update soon!
CarmlLuv chapter 19 . 3/29/2009
KHUTE! lolz update soon..
Little-miss-twilight chapter 19 . 2/6/2009
This is REALLY good, and just a side note, you should change the status of your story from "complete" to "in-progress"
Little-miss-twilight chapter 10 . 2/6/2009
Just wondering but are you a Twilighter? Just because the whole sleep talking thing is so Bella! I am really enjoying this story so far.
BittersweetSymphony-TheVerve chapter 19 . 2/4/2009
Nice chapter. I like how you had it take 19 chapters for them to get back together. i hate the stories that have them back together, in an instant, so not realistic! but it was really good, update soon
Cullengirl105 chapter 19 . 2/2/2009
Omg i cannot believe how good this is. i just read this at like 12:00 at night and even after getting in trouble for being up late finished reading it/ It was so worth it. Cant wait to read the next chapter.
edennn chapter 19 . 2/2/2009
ah i just read all 19 chapters! its amazing. like the real book or something. and finally josh and reed back together! i really like how you waited so long for them to get back together because that makes it more realistic.
ilovetoread38 chapter 19 . 2/2/2009
Yay! Josh and Reed are back together after 19 chapters! the only thing that i have to say is that you should make more contractions. I mean, I'm not going to say "i could not live with out you"i would say "I couldn't live with out you". It just makes everything flow better. Also, where are they? in a pink room? Great Job!
Sarah-Blureberry chapter 19 . 2/2/2009
Finally! LOL, they finally are together. WOW this chapter was amazing. LOL. I loved it. But where did he take her? OR did i miss that. But who cares, They're together! WOW. :) PLEASE UPDATE!
Privateserieslvr chapter 19 . 2/2/2009
love it! Update sooner though! Now that their back together. I love ur style of writing the most out of like everyone writer on fan fiction! :] it's great! update soon missy! XD
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