Reviews for Midnight Desire |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know why I find that a teenage boy's attempt to seduce a girl might include pickled frogs to be so funny; but I do. I really do. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I knew it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I did not even grasp he was dreaming. I thought wow this is happening really fast but i'm not complaing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The monster is hilarious |
![]() ![]() If I had a penny for every time you've written "the monster" i'd be as rich as Bill Gates |
![]() ![]() ![]() Smutty fun |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great smut ;-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was amazing LMAOO the monster was hysterical, youre the original Big Mouth |
![]() ![]() ![]() He waste too much time fantasizing and is staring to get annoying. I don't want to read something that is not happening half chapter. The story is interesting, though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my gawd! I LOVED IT! Amazing! I did not want to see it end! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your version is more fun than the official x) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol! This is so funny! Poor Edward, what teenage boys have to put up with! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this story so much...thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank God he found her in time! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohhhh shit |