Great story! Very believable :)

So sweet and describes the both of them perfectly. :) Thank you for writing.

dangerous yet erotic i love it!

There are a lot of Honeymoon fics out there but I must say how good this one is.I like it because you really keep to is still shy and doesn't become some wanton thing and Edward shows his demon and also how unsure he is and doesn't become a manwhore who know exactly how to pleae a woman (although he does quite well here;)

Good Two shot!

Beautifully written and certainly the missing honeymoon night pages from the book "Breaking Dawn".

These 2 pages could easily be slipped in there for a more satisfying read. I am going to print them out and slip them in my book for the next time I read it.

I am sure we all knew that it would be a struggle for Edward as well as an emotionally and physically overwheming experience to finally share himself with Bella...and be able to control his instinctive desire to drink her blood. You described his struggle and fear, his yearning and desire for Bella so well...and so beautifully too. Thank You...

Sincerely,

Lynn Rayve

YUM!

I love the "love" side of their intimacy. I don't mind me some great smut every now-and-then but the love between them is what has me so addicted. I just can't get enough of it.

great job! loved it!

SO SWEET!

U described Edwards pov beautifully . U r an amazing writer. Putting u on my favorites. Amazing

Fantastic adaptation of their wedding night. Very well written.

i LOVED THIS. so much! i loved the end with the eyes and i loved that it wasnt graphic. this is probably the best ive read! it wasnt raunchy or anything. love this!

NICE!

Perfect. Beautiful. Sweet. Romantic. Very sexy. Very Edward and Bella.

r u updating soon?

That was intense... I liked the way he was fighting against the thirst... maybe another story about how she finally convinces him to give in... that would be great to read

such a dangerous and erotic event, so delicately told. insightful. just wonderful. please keep writing.