WTF was that? OMG I don't remember my bag being sooooooo heavy, it must be someone elses bag...oh no wait, it must be these REALLY HEAVY FLOWERS! that was so fucking stupid.

I don't get why bella was being so nice to Edward. She rips her fucking pants open and he laughs and grins...like its a huge fucking joke. Bella a stupid girl if this is the kind of guy she likes. A real man would have helped cover her up not fucking laughed at her.

IM sure Edward was a hoe in college just like most guys yet he didn't have the balls to tell bella he liked her? YAaaaa ok

They act like children... Aren't they supposed to be working adults?

Please don't leave us hanging! Come back and finish!

lookin forward to reading more x

I just wanted to say that I love this little outburst and could not agree with you more! If you want Bella to be boring and dull then fucking read twilight!

I am really loving your story by the way!

This is soo good! I love this story! Please, update soon!

Why is he riding with them? Why did he leave liek that?

awwww! Nice))) I'm going to ch.2)))))

Thank you for writing))))

This story is truly amazing! You've written it beautifully and I love the realistic tone to it. Life isn't all peaches and roses, people get hurt. I love the characters and my heart goes out to Ryan, I love him especially and root for the underdog's happiness, even though this is an ExB story. Bella can have Edward, I get Ryan ;). I can't wait for the next chapter, what a place to leave it at! As for all those people who said you haven't written this story well... Screw them. Frankly, this story rocks!

woo hoo awesome start i can't wait tto read more

That was great but when r u making another one cant wait and also love your note i resprct u!

I respect dat

That was all you had? :S

I mean, don't get me wrong, the story is great, but if that is the ending... well let's just say that the story ends pretty bad (...the ending sucks)