Reviews for When I Look At The Stars
Debbie Hicks chapter 16 . 7/10/2017
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Loved by the Sun
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Guest chapter 7 . 1/2/2017
She doesn't know leah and Seth are wolves?
Guest chapter 6 . 1/2/2017
Does Lucas know he is a wolf? What's the light thing?
Keltyr chapter 7 . 7/26/2015
I am loving this alternate view of the imprinting universe...keep it coming lilyma!
Keltyr chapter 5 . 7/26/2015
Ur doing good with this story kid...I'm really enjoying new'ish characters.
teamwerewolfforever chapter 16 . 7/14/2013
PLease PLEASE update this story. It a really good one. I can't wait to read more!
Guest chapter 16 . 7/9/2012
I really loved this story so far. You are an amazing writer! -Aly
awesomeami316 chapter 16 . 3/26/2012
Ah she got arresteed!
star11365 chapter 16 . 12/29/2011
please update

ru going to finish it?
goodpointsorwhat chapter 8 . 12/17/2011
THIS DOESN'T MAKE SENSE.

Cate is cousins with Leah and Seth. Luc is her Bro. He is also cousins with Leah and Seth.

Therefore, he imprinted, on his cousin.

WTF?
bookfreak345 chapter 16 . 11/27/2011
i really like this story alot!

You have really good writing skills!
not dead yet chapter 16 . 11/23/2011
beautiful story
Mariana Lestrange chapter 16 . 11/11/2011
Great story!

thanks for writing!
lilmaher chapter 16 . 10/26/2011
Brilliant chapter :)

xxx
goldeneyes123 chapter 16 . 10/25/2011
wow still can't believe that she got arrested
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