Reviews for Vicissitudes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOD SHE JUST REMEMBERED THAT EDWARD LEFT HER OH MY GOD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now Bella don't know her husband. GOD I HATE THAT |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOD WHAT DO YOU MEAN BELLA CAN'T REMEMBER EDWARD?! HO GOD |
![]() ![]() Thank you thank you thank you! This was brilliant! I loved reading it ️️️ Bella and Edward are the best |
![]() ![]() This started out great. But then, Bella was "kidnapped" from the mall...whilst she was with two vampires. Ya, it sounds even dumber now. WTF? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() About to leave 70 odd reviews bc this deserves to get to a thousand |
![]() ![]() He...fell to his knee because she was in the dark for a few days? Shes fine now, stop being weird. |
![]() ![]() Its not the wolves or the volturri….well then she wasn't taken. Im just saying...who in the fuck would want to kidnap an 18 year old? And from the mall of all places. And magically under a sight seeing vampires nose...YA RIGHT |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyable, well written story. Aro and Caius were nasty, kidnapping and changing Bella like this. Bella always wanted Edward to change her, but she handled that disappointment well. Marcus showed more animation in your story ;-). He sees immortality as a gift where Edward sees it as a curse, and can't understand Edwards view considering the bond between Edward and Bella. Carlise is angry that Aro calls Bella "daughter". Aro has stolen from Carlise as well as Edward, in regards to Bella. Love how Edward is courting Bella again and in a different way, and she actually accepts his gifts! Wow, Edward sure is a lucky guy (wink, wink) when he discovers Bella's unique gift! Thanks for writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() really enjoyed this story, well written. |
![]() ![]() OMG what a hilarious ending! I really enjoyed this fanfiction, it was quite the journey! I liked your interpretation of the charactors a lot. |
![]() ![]() isn't Edward a vampire? if so, why does he have to "try" to remember something? Anyway...has this turned into a try to get bella to remember story now? Like I haven't read 20 of those already...and they were more interesting, sorry. |
![]() ![]() ya...I bet seeing NOTHING really takes its toll on alice...LOL seriously? some of the things you say...omg |
![]() ![]() I'm sorry did you write that the kidnapping was ELABORATELY planned? Doesn't sound very elaborate...sounds really simple actually. Do you really picture the cullens just sitting around the house waiting for information to fall into their laps? doesn't seem right does it? |