Again, because of my own experiences and those within my family, this was a challenging story to read, and yet brutally honest and beautifully written. That's a difficult balance to achieve. Well done.

Impressive. Formidable even. So well written that it was almost painful to read. Your writing made me feel McGee's pain. Well done. Hope you keep writing.

Wow! I have to say, this is an amazing story. I've read the whole thing over the past few days. Poor Tim! I'm glad everyone was there to help him through...

A superior story! Congratulations on a really good work. (You kept me up until 5 am, my dear! lol :-D ) You are ready to write your a novel and get it published!

tltr sorry :(

I just found this story and all I have to say is... THANK YOU! Thank you for creating a something that was so beautifully written, original and basically prefect in every way! If you haven't figured out already I very much enjoyed reading your story. Thank you again for sharing this.

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Tony Tony Tony,

Talk about being obsessive, Tony. You know, I think you have become quite obsessive over Timothy. And for all those times you invade his privacy, I could make a claim that you are actually STALKING him. When are you going to learn Tony that invading someones privacy is NOT a nice thing to do.

I think Tim should be trying to invade Tony's privacy and find some really dark secret of Tony's and announce that all over the NCIS. THEN Tony will know what it feels like. That is the only way that bullies like Tony will learn. But as long as Tim allows bullies like Tony to walk all over him, Tony will continue to do so. And NO Tony has no boundaries at all. Neither does Abby.

Great story - so far - Just found this today.

Great story. I like it.

The case ist over. Now i want to know was happend. it was really mcgee hurt...

I enjoyed this story very much! Great work!

That was a nice chapter. I like how you portray Jenny. :) The conversation between her and Tim was nice.

I'm glad that Tim's friends are finding all of that stuff now...poor Tim would have been broken down for years had he kept finding those things!

I like Ducky as his therapist. Great work in this chapter!

Wow, go Ziva! And great gym scene... that is a healthy way of getting things out... Tim may have gone a bit too long, though lol :)