Not Bella, Jacely!

why does it say bella if its in jakes pov

Embry didnt imprint at all Jarred imprinted on kim great story though!

awesome story! Luv it :)

really good so far

i love the storie but i'm confused you say it is in jakes eyes and it talks about the pack but then you say my bella?i thought he loved jace! i confused! sorry for being picky but i love the storie!

u keep having jacob say bella but u must mean jacely...its very confusing

Jarred Imprinted On Kim Not EMBRY!

I love this story. Go Jacob! in this chapter did you mean to kep saying Bella?

Hey,

it's me agian.

i finished Twin Imorint 1

and lke ai said earlier

LOVE IT!

i would read the second story tonight but

i have MSA's tomorrow morning so i have to

go to sleep soon

thanks agian for giving Jake somebody to love

him back! great story. will be readin more of yours soon

night. and liek i said. keep up the good work. ~

SO far i am in love with your story!

Don't worry this is SO interesting

i'm feeling sleep deprived. lol.

you really know how to shake things up

and add more interst. i love jakob and

i was so pissed what happened to him in the

first three books of twilight and i am

hoping S. M. gives him his bond mate in book four

if not i'll be sending a uber disapointed letter.

again, LOVE your story.

all i could say if you wanted to

improve it later on is adding more detail.

but there really isn't a need for that if you aren't geting

a book published. it is fanfiction after all. and it's Myres work so you couldn't get it published without her consent.

anyway. keep up the awesome work.

LOVE JAKE AND JACE TOGETHER! *CHEERS*

Awesome chapter... I like this story a lot so far, and I can't wait to read it!

i liked it

FFS USE COMMAS!

OMG u can't spell! USE WORD! USE SPELLCHECK!

THE DINEYPHOBIA THING WAS BRILLIANT! COMPLETELY AMAZING! although im realy confused who is who's kid and who is imprinted with who?