Reviews for Palmistry |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Your narration is beautiful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() im crying this is beautiful. this is the content i am here for i love it so much i love the way you built up existing history and mythology and then made it your own! this is wonderfully written and just. perfect |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Very nicely done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, wow. This was so good. It was beautifully written and so ridiculously in-character; you really managed to catch how Pullman wrote the witches. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is so lovely, and beautiful. and i think its a really interesting insight into characters whose lives we don't get to see. i think, really, that's what fanfiction is all about. finding the stories that are there, but aren't told. very well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! Beautiful writing and there's a nice melancholic touch over the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is incredibility lovey, and you captured Serafina's voice perfectly. The end? Nothing short of poetry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() One word. Amazing. Please write more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. a interesting and different take on serafina - who, by the way is one of the most underused characters in the series. I salute you! my favourite line: This is how you kill a witch: You can take her and tie her to her own cloud pine and set it alight. Or, you can break her heart. I love your story. Kee up the wonderful writing. x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heartbreaking and eloquent and real, and I loved it. My first HDM fic, and it really impressed me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautifully written story! I can't imagine Lee and Serafina having anything but a sad ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I really liked that one. You've got a very different, unusual writing style, but it reads well and you manage to create a mood with very few words. I like how you wrote Scoresby, this is just spot-on. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I wanted some Lee/Serafina SO BAD, and I didn't think I'd find any of any sort of quality. But I was wrong! A lovely piece. |
![]() ![]() ![]() too beautiful for words. write more pls. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice... present-tense angsty oneshot with a plot. Something I could never manage. I can imagine Lee Scoresby talking the way you have him talking, and I really liked the way you have Serafina slowly becoming a human. Just... niceness, if I tried to list all the nice things in the fic the review would be a page long. Perfection, anyways. :) |