Reviews for In a Nutshell
Alaine chapter 1 . 6/17
I love you so much ! These are exactly the kind of Jily fanfics out there..
Guest chapter 1 . 6/5
It's completely true. I've read so many Jily fanfictions and honestly its the same pattern everytime. Thankyou for pointing it out. And I love how blunt you are. Thanks for writing this
MidnightStars chapter 1 . 4/25
Jewels thank you for being alive. You are now my favorite writer and I am so glad to have discovered your work last week. I hope that you still take time to read reviews and this reaches you.
Cococauldroncakes chapter 1 . 4/5
This made me laugh
snitch-seeker chapter 1 . 3/9
OMG, thats so true...I've read so many of them and almost all of them have this same exact pattern...seriously, I am sick of hearing about the girl with the dirty blonde hair and blue eyes, its always the same description with different names...and even Lily's boyfriends' names are right...
This is so absolutely true and I'm glad its pointed out...
Excellent work
cshen.julienne chapter 1 . 11/12/2019
I guffawed at this. XD HAHAHHAHAHHA

LOVE IT! EPIC
Guest chapter 1 . 1/29/2019
this is such a callout and i am positively thriving
Guest chapter 1 . 1/7/2019
BWHAHAHA the blunt humour
Loved it :')
"Lyk omg"
problematic spiral chapter 1 . 11/7/2018
this is painfully true, a lot of Jily fanfics usually act like this, it's a clinche. That aside, this was pretty amazing.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/27/2018
The most cliche story line of the James and Lily fics is when James suddenly gets a girlfriend right as Lily realizes she fancies him! I prefer fics that follow cannon closely so it just doesn’t make sense to me when he has a girlfriend before they get together in the seventh year when they’re cannonically together by the holidays because they double date with The Dursleys.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/27/2018
You realize it’s more likely Sirius was the one hooking up with Lily’s roommates right? Except in your stories you have James shagging her roommate in their seventh year ffs. How sweet.
Clarice chapter 1 . 5/30/2018
You abandoned your epic, though. :(
SolKs chapter 1 . 2/3/2018
This is just precious! Very insightful:) Thanks a lot.
Scripturient16 chapter 1 . 1/26/2018
I'm laughing so hard...

But that's actually so true.. especially about the abandoning the epic thing... I'm glad you didn't, after all you did, I wouldn't have been able to survive
27Vespertine chapter 1 . 12/5/2017
Heheh.

Okay I feel like it's not polite to laugh at these things and I do feel al little bad that I did laugh (a lot), because it's so true? Somehow you nailed it all to a T! I still have to finish this one chapter, but after reading your precise analysis of LilyOC1OC2 I went straight for the comment box, because sadly, it's true! And well, even the best writers fall into that trap sometimes, I guess, but... yeah.

I wanted to copy some sentences in here that really made me laugh or say "oh, true!", but I would end up showing you almost everything. But I agree most with the descriptions and pairings of the best friends (especially in how the OC's look), and with the fact that most writers hate Peter and thus don't even bother including him into the story as a normal, respectable character. That mostly makes me sad, because he wouldn't be their friend if he was this horrible person to begin with, right? :(

Anyway. Feel a bit bad for laughing and agreeing, but also happy that it made me smile.
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