Crap story. Ka this, Ka that.

This is one of my favourite harry potter fan fictions.

Please update! I'd be so keen to find out what happens next!

Thanks so much for writing this amazing story.

Noooo! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE FINNISH PLEASE! OR PUT IT UP FOR ADOPTION!

Ah, one of those one hit wonders. Unlike Rock, no one will remembet this, Hey

Given how long it has been since the last up date I find this chapter ending to be a really annoying cliff-hanger. I REALLY hope you start posting again... real soon.

I have been waiting to get to Chapter 23 for hours to leave a review, because I always try and leave one on the last/last updated chapter, and here I am at this cliffhanger. Before I say more, I seriously want to say thank you for updating this story, even though it's been 2 years. As the queen of unfinished works, I know how hard it is to keep going, but my stories don't even reach the caliber of yours. This CLIFFHANGER! I've never felt more betrayed in my entire life. (That's a lie). Your writing is fantastic, but your worldbuilding is absolutely magnificent. I've never seen this take on Harry Potter before, and you've somehow combined all of my favorite things: assassins, cool ritualistic magic, long hair, Greek gods, and excellent character names. How did you do it? This is one of the coolest fanfictions I've ever read, I'm so happy that I found it. If you ever update again, I can't wait to see what's in store next. I'm sure any other readers will agree when I say we'll wait patiently. (Obviously, there's absolutely no pressure. If you've already decided to quit the fanfic scene, you're totally valid and I'm glad that this is still up for us to read anyway!)

That moment when you realize you are at the last chapter and start screaming internally

Amazing ! I really hope you finish this remarkable piece of work someday! wish you all the best !

You should be sorry since you abandoned the story :(

Please keep going with this story, ive never been so excited for a fanfic. It's amazing, you really bring the characters out

Are you sorry now?

no pls no you can't leave it at that pls don't leave it at that

Out of all the possible cliff hangers, this ones the most cliffy and steep

Wait wait wait...wait...Bellatrix wasn't ALREADY dead? You'd killed her a couple chapters before :p ...but whatever...I loved your fic dude, it's a shame you abandoned it ;/

Bellatrix is kinda dead dude. you killed her a couple of chapters ago... wtf... the tonks/harry thing, kinda not working that well. tbh i thought this was a snape/harry thing, they have tons of chemistry in your story. tonks and harry have kinda... nothing.

decent story so far tho, bit cringy from time to time but not too bad in that regard