Reviews for Alive All Over |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is pure brilliance Written amazingly I just can't stop imagining James' face at the end when Sirius jumps Remus :P Also...you have a way with words and explanations Those bits where you drew comparisons between distinct events and feelings, you know which ones I'm talking about are sublime... Great Stuff _ |
![]() ![]() Awesome. Nice job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can you please write more? |
![]() ![]() *casual You speed it causal. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely. Poor James though, what a way to find out. But lovely. |
![]() ![]() Honestly, what made this story different from all the others was the end. James not knowing what to do practically made my heart break. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was phenomenal. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Prongs is a very cool friend. hahahaa |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why, that was a fun read. I thought you might end on a slightly sader note what with the "keeping his distance"-thing and I'm not completely sure, how would have worked it out, had you continued a bit longer, but this ending suits me just fine as it's happy and these two would deserve a happy end if the could get one. Well, I think, you gave us a good example for a two-minute-that's-how-one-could-deal-with-being-gay story line and it felt not forced at all in its shortness. So yeah, I liked it very much and might be looking into more of your work. Regards. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :D!WOW!What a wonderful fic!Absolutely loved the friendly moments you could bring out between the boys and those dares!God,they have the worst ever dares,and the idea of saying 'no' to a dare too,lol! I loooooved loved loved the tension between Sirius and Remus,the feelings,the way they feel 'alive' and so real whenever they're together and showing the contrsating thoughts of Sirius's about his life at home and at Hogwarts,really well done with that! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So amazing. Brilliantly descriptive. |
![]() ![]() love it :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww this is very sweet. I love Peter sting cereal up his nose. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I adore this so friggin' much... I just wish there was, you know, more... :) I'm gonna go see if you write anything with an M rating. ;) |