I love the personalities between these two characters, you’re an excellent writer.

Thanks for sharing your one shot.

I don’t know why I laughed so hard. I love this story

Even though she'd loved the blistering heat in Phoenix, I'm sure a great deal of the time she was in air conditioned comfort! And given the normal temps in Forks, Charlie wouldn't have A.C.. Thank goodness for her vampire!

Lol, I love it!

though i don't ship BxE anymore, I always find myself re-reading this little gem. It never fails to make me laugh! I can just picture Edward's brain going a million miles a minute with so many innuendos when Bella said that. *cackles* I bet he'd blush worse than Bella if he could! huehuehuehue btw I've already reviewed in my account so i'm going anon, using my account username. x3

Sweet, and dangerously funny.

Haha, that was the funniest one-shot I've ever read. The awkward moments were very well described and I loved reading every second of it. Nice job!

Reaching out, I snagged a fistful of his shirt and yanked it. Hard. As I did so, I gave him my demand:

"Take off your clothes."

Silence.

Outside, a cricket chirped.

That was H-I-L-A-R-I-O-U-S. I almost fell off my chair :D
And it was so sweet, too. :-)

Best bella and edward I've read so far :)

This was a really good one-shot! I loved it! :)

This was really funny! Loved it! :L xx

One of my favorite stories! I come back & read it frequently. Thanks for posting! :)

Very funny and cute; Edward has no means whatsoever to be embarrassed ;D

D'awwwwwwwwwwwwwh! So cuuute!