This story is awesome! The best one I have read so far! Keep up the work please... I want to know what happen! Pls!awesome!

more update

This is a heart-wrenching story. I wish there was more of it.

Please tell me I did not read this whole story only to have it never be finished! It's been four years since your last update! I need to know what happens! PLEASE!...don't mean to sound angry I really do love this story, you've done an amazing job with it please finish!

POR DIOS! no puedo esperar al otro capitulo aaaaaaaa esta muy buena tu historiaaa por fa continua la historia POR FAVORRRRRR (estando de rodillas con ojitos de perrito) no puedo esperar :'( pliss

Raph gonna get one hell ofva lecture

Awww poor thing I hope you feel better! /:) and poor Raphael it sounds like he is having a shitty day! I now what thats like ;) anyways I love the story!

Very well written and engaging! But you are killing me by not finishing this! Please finish! And please let Raph live! I read a fanfict similar to this where Raph died, and I didn't read anymore fan fiction for 2 months! :( Pretty please? ;)

Hey :)
I have reread this story about 3 times already. I know what your thinking "man... She as no life"
Not true! I just love this story, and I'm worried that when you update, I'll forget what happened!
Speaking of updates... When are you doing yours? It would be awesome if it was soon!
Thanks a ton for reading this!
-Tori

i hope you continue even though its been a few years

Please update soon! This is to good!

Please update ASAP! It's an amazing story and I can't wait for more! Keep writing!

that was awesome!
whens the next chapter?
i cant wait!

PLEASEEEE! finish the story:( pretty please?

Awww, where did you go? Please come back and finish this story- it is really good! Will raph awaken? Will he be cured from this virus/poison that is killing him?