Reviews for Broken Mind, Fractured Soul
Ltheslytherin chapter 38 . 7/18
Great hermione’s being terrible too. I really hate both of them. Canon Hermione was a lot better to Harry. How can she expect Harry to stick up for that idiotic asshole?
Ltheslytherin chapter 37 . 7/18
Wow Ron’s being an even bigger asshole than in canon here. Knowing about Harry’s upbringing and home life as well as some of his insecurities should make him less of a prat. I really hate him here
Nargelz chapter 24 . 6/26
Luna!
Nargelz chapter 17 . 6/25
I mean I love? I guess idk. But anyway I really like hermione and Ron in the movies most the time (Luna is one of may faverotes) but I don’t really like Ron or hermione in this
Nargelz chapter 14 . 6/25
Cause it none of you business!
arcra chapter 20 . 5/31
I am in frustration right now but Sirius, why in the seven hells do you think it is okay to be there when Severus said that your secured house location is not in that specific European country.

Think, you dasterd man, !

As much as I love you and mean well but dude, I wanna strangle you right now.

(Btw, ABSOLUTELY love this! It's been a long time since I found a fanfiction worth to keep me up late at night and enjoying reading every bits of sentences, word-per-word. I'd usually skim, get the gist of the situation, and get started reading the dialogues part but this literally got me hook since Chapter 1! I'm also thoroughly impressed on how you introduced each Personalities and it was easy for me to distinguish who is talking and remembering what they look like. Hope to keep up this same level of intrigueness 'till the end of the chapter!)
Winston Summerville chapter 5 . 4/25
I will say that overall this story is written quite well, and the depiction of alters is rather accurate. But the premise that to treat DID (which is what it's been called for many years now, MPD is inaccurate and outdated) you must congeal all the personalities together to form one whole by the process of integration, is completely inaccurate. the foundation of therapy for DID is first increasing communication and trust among alters to produce a safe environment from which to process trauma. the goal of most therapy is to decrease dissociative symptoms by increasing communication and coconsciousness between alters as well as processing trauma. very few people go on to integrate an entire system. it is a tremendous ordeal that is not always even possible. treatment is typically centered around healthy multiplicity and reducing clinical symptoms, not turning a multiple into a singlet.
DracosTaintedDreamer chapter 52 . 4/10
omg when sev said "take me home" I dissolved into tears
DracosTaintedDreamer chapter 28 . 4/9
are you serious?! ugh Dumbledore is a rat. he is so disgusting
DracosTaintedDreamer chapter 13 . 4/7
ive read this several times. I love the foreshadowing! Neville's love of nature?! brilliant
Leo105 chapter 53 . 3/18
Alright. So I just finished this story in under a week because I *couldn't *stop *reading. Seriously, this was bloody amazing. I can't even begin to describe what I loved the most. You must have done so much research about his condition and psychology in general, I'm really impressed. Also, I really loved how you portrayed the characters, they really were on point. The only two characters I wasn't too content with were Dumbledore and McGonagall. Don't get me wrong, I know Dumbledore is a manipulating bastard, but I don't believe him to be evil. He has his good sides as well, but I guess he just needed to be that way for the story. And McGonagall was a little bit too heartless and uncaring imo. Idk. She was one of my favourite characters in the books, and I didn't feel that independence I felt from her in the books. She was more along the lines of Dumbledore's pawn. But again, I guess that just had to be the case for this story. Or you just perceive her that way. But we'll see how her character develops in the next story, I really can't wait!
Thank you so so much for this masterpiece. You did a fantastic job, honestly this must be one of my all time favourite fanfictions out there.
SlytherRaynne chapter 54 . 1/19
This page gives my heart such happiness! :)
Guest chapter 21 . 1/7
Do you really ask those questions? - Since it is an Italian house it should have an Italian name?
Guest chapter 19 . 1/7
I think Ron and Hermione are children who do not really understand evil.
Guest chapter 13 . 1/4
I am very happy that this story is finished and for me there are no cliffhangers. I would be passionately otherwise too.
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