Reviews for Lily Potter and the Worst Holiday |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Well-written wholesome story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fraking Epic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow you made Hermione more annoying than she already is. Couldn't you just kill her off instead, that way she doesn't ruin the story. |
![]() ![]() OH NO I WANT TO SEE THE QUIDDITCH GAME! Either timeline match-up or Weasleys vs Potters! Dangit! |
![]() ![]() God I love this story, have read it a few times throughout the years and it’s always fun. Thanks for writing ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! This story was really well written. I'm astounded as to how well planned it was. I really like the fact that there's a different timeline and such. I think you've done a decent job with the characters—specifically to this timeline. I really like how all the AU changes add up to each other. I especially like the part of Dumbledore taking up the blame of killing Voldemort twice! It was very much like him. Whenever I think of Harry's parents lived AUs, I never think of him having more siblings, but this definitely seems more logical and a lovely touch! My only criticism for the characters would be the Golden Trio itself. I felt Harry and Hermione acted more vindictive, and Ron more aloof and insensitive than in canon. The last choice of all the characters to not go back to their timeline really felt..not like them. If there was a War going on, those children would be the last to quit. I am certain that despite every lovely blissful thing this world offered, the canon counterparts of the six kids would've refused to stay and would try their best to return back and try to end that War. It reminds me of the time Harry refused to fall for trap of the Mirror of Erised. It offered him everything he had lost, his deepest desires, adn an escape to the War—just like this world did. The only difference being that Harry openly accepted this and refused the Mirror. That said, it doesn't mean I hated the ending. It was a lovely ending. Harry and Lily finally talking to each other was a very touching moment, especially the time when Harry asked Lily if he could call her "mum". Absolutely lovely. Well done on this story! I'm very impressed. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was actually a fun story |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG this is amazing. That last line of Lily’s.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful ending, especially how you showed that the two iterations would become fast friends and family. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Intriguing start on this story. It's absolutely riveting. You did an excellent job of giving some information, hinting at other possibilities and leaving the rest kind of open-ended. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The only reason I don't like this story is because of Harry/Hermione pairing. It feels forced. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was brilliant. I enjoyed this fic very much. Especially the last chapter; it really warmed my heart. Phenomenal work :) |
![]() ![]() Is this a rewrite of the story? I remember reading it before. But hermione shouldn't chastise harry about flying after the stunt she pulled with the dragon, lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the nice story :-) |