Brilliant story, I loved every chapter of it. Well done

Just Reread this story again 10 years later. So wonderful. This fic was heartbreaking and gorgeous at the same time. Thanks for the feels.
Ps I laugh out load when I read your stories. Your humour shines through so brilliantly.

THANKS FOR THIS WONDERFUL STORY, I HAVE READ IT ONCE BEFORE, BUT THIS TIME I FOUND IT EVEN MORE ENJOYABLE,,,,,,I DID LIKE IT A LOT THE FIRST TIME I READ IT, SO THANKS FOR WRITING GSR STORIES THIS ONE YES IS AN OLD STORY BUT HAS STOOD THE TEST OF TIME WELL DONE, JUST WISH YOU HAD A SECENE WITH SARA AND GRISSOM TELLING BRENDA THEY WERE TOGETHER...

I JUST LOVE GRISSOM,,,,HE IS SO ,,,,,,,,,,,OH YES, THANKS MR. PETERSEN FOR CREATING JORJA OH YES...THANKS FOR CREATING SARA I LOVE HER,,,,YOU BOTH HAVE GIVEN GSR WRITERS TWO WONDERFUL CHARACTERS TO WRITE SUCH GREAT STORIES ABOUT. EVEN NOW THE S HOW IS OVER YOUR CHARACTERS ARE ALIVE AND HAVING GREAT ADVENTURES.

OH HOW CAN YOU SAY NOTHING MUCH HAPPENED IN THIS CHAPTER,,,,,,,,,SO MUCH HAPPENED BRENDA GOT A NEW LIFE AND A NEW MOTHER AND MOST O ALL SHE WAS WANTED AND ADOPTED, THATS QUITE ALOT...PLUSSSSS SARA BECAME A MOTHER...I JUST NEED GRISSOM TO GET HIS ACT TOGETHER...SO 10 OUT OF 10 FOR THIS LAST CHAPTER,,,,VISUAL, TENSE, BEAUTIFUL.

IM READING THIS STORY AGAIN, I JUST LOVE IT,,I LOVE SARA IN THIS FORM,,,,,,,NOT OFTEN SEEN ON THE SHOW...BUT DEEP DOWN BEHIND HER VERY HIGH WALL THIS SARA WAS HIDING,OWNLY GRISSOM SAW THE WHOLE HER...I REALLY MISS THE SHOW, THANK GOODNESS FOR RERUNS,,AND BOX SETS. GREAT STORY SO WELL WRITTEN, THANK YOU FOR WRITING GSR STORIES. ONWARDS NEXT CHAPTER.

THIS HAS BEEN A REALLY GOOD STORY, GOOD TENSION ALSO ALOT OF VERY VISUAL PICTURES,GRISS AND SARA CHANGING THE BABY,,,THE EPILOGUE AS DARK , BUT I UNDERSTAND HAT HAPPENED AT THAT TIME IN NEW YORK,,,,,GOD REST THERE SOULS, THANK YOU FOR WRITING GSR ITS BEEN AND IS MY ESCAPE TOO.

AI HOPE GRISSOM IS GOING TO TURN UP SOON REALLY GOOD CHAPTER, PLENTY OF TENSION AND ITS GOOD TO SEE SARA IN THIS ROLL,

I like your writing. The epilogue is good, it feels like an epilogue. One thing though, what are you trying to do? You basically left the last chapter in a cliffhanger, then post an epilogue that doesn't answer much of the cliffhanger. Just a little hint of what might've happened. What exactly happened? Did Sara said yes? Did they get married? Did Brenda find out about them, & how? Did Sara make him take the offer from NYU & do long distance relationship(I think this happened based on the epilogue)? Why are you doing this to me? You brought me to the edge of a cliff and pushed, then left me hanging because my safety line is stuck on the rock. I can't go back up, I can't fall all the way down. I'm on a limbo. TT
Still, I love your writing. Good job, well done. ;-)

This was absolutely fantastic. Your characterizations were spot on, which is a must for me when reading fic. I've read all your stories and enjoyed every single one of them. I'm late to the GSR ship, but I'm glad to have lots of fic to read. Thanks for all your hard work.

Ah, sorry ma'am," the owner told her loudly, "Mistah Police Know-It-All says no customer until he finish dusting my counter with midget duster."

Sara held up her identification.

The owner threw up his hands. "Oh, Mrs. Police Know-It-All! Who next? Baby? Why not bring rest of family to watch you dust my counter. I save nice seat for Grandma. I already gave you video tape!" he exclaimed to Grissom.

This made me lol
Mr deip is hilarious

I started this story today and can't stop reading it. It's wonderful! It's absolutely believable that Sara Sidle, five years later, would be interested in being in Brenda's life. When Sara picks Brenda up and calls her "baby" while soothing the kiddos worries.. My heart just melted.

I'm hoping Grissom soon becomes interested in being apart of this little family. Fingers crossed!

So many of your stories can easily be envisioned as an episode of CSI. This could have easily been a long story line behind solving crime. It could be a stand alone novel in my opinion. It's so good. I'm thankful I have like 70 more chapters to read.

entonces se casan...el adopta a brenda? Si verdad...viven juntos o solo lo dice por que el y sara se separan y sara se regresa a las vegas y el decide retomar su profecion en ny

24 Hours and I'm finally done. Loooovvvvved this story.

So I know this took you about three years to write but I read it in two days I wad so addicted to it. The first half I couldn't put it down because I wanted to see how you would incorporate GSR (and your angst was unbelievably awesome). The second half I couldn't stop reading because I kept guessing at what would come next and I wanted to see where the story would take us. Superb job! Thank you for all of your fics. You have great talent.