I know that zack and jenny does have that gross factor but i like it kind of explains a lot. They use to marry there cousins and stuff. I also know you havent up dated this story in four years so im not holding my breath about you writing more into this story. But I have seen people come back and write more so in my most pledding voice can you please write more to this story.

aww,i like the last i really don't think insest is that bad.i mean,come on it's only look and law,feelings and what your heart tells you is far more important that what someone else is telling you to do because everyone else is too.i don't fancy my cousins or anything,i barely know them and the idea of it happening in my family is gross(but that's because my only male cousin is 4 and the rest are snotty brat girls whole i never see) but i don't have anything against to anyone who reads this i'm sorry if you think i'm sick,i'm not i'm just open.

anyway,i really liked this,makes me deturmined to write a cousin thing for my NW thumbs up!

Willow

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Please write more! I need more Zach/Jenny fanfics! lol.

I love this story. Its really good.

Yous hould definetly CONTINUE this!

This is so cute! You should totally continue!1

OK, I know this was written a fair while ago, but please.. please keep writing?

I was always kinda drawn to the idea of jenny/zach, and up until now I hadn't really read anything that caught my attention. So please, if you've been thinking about writing more of this wonderful story I swear to every God i believe in (even the minor ones), I WILL read and review.

Sincerely,

Miz

Oh please, please, please write another chapter! Zach/Jenny is such an interesting pairing, and has so much potential for angst!

Wow. That was extremely well-written, and I love reading about Zach. He happened to be my favorite character but he is often overlooked, and for some reason, people don't much seem to care that he has feelings for her.

I'm totally reading the secon chapter as soon as I get home from work, and I'll leave a review there, too.

But in case you're curious: you are a very good writer. There were some grammatical mistakes, but no one's perfect. You got them both quite IC, and it saddens me that there are only two chapters here.

Keep writing, but you need help. What is it with you and cousins? you better get them togther or let him meet a nice red head called Mia. Up to you

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Please write more. This is a great story and while I don't have any idea where you plan to take it, I can't wait for the next part. Can you just picture the parents reaction if they even found out?

this story was really good. you should continue (and make Julian come back! God I love Julian). I reviewed the story before and said that Julian was out of character, but that was before I read the second chapter. Great Job!

oh, angst, i like angst! definitely continue. although i have to warn you before, im not so keen on jenny zach pairing but no one can deny a good story, right?

oh and jenny seems a bit weak, if you ask me. i mean i thought she would be a strong character (i havent read the forbidden game in a long while, so forgive me if im wrong), you know after all the games and all. also i think she shouldnt be so hard on julian i mean he died for her, also the fact i like him. *grin*

with all that out of the way, on to the compliments! i like what you did at the end, adding zachs thought, it kind of secures the chappie.

you know i hadnt expected jenny to still be with tom, thats a twist. i like the way you handled the zach/ summer relationship. i just want to say, youre doing very well with the story and please continue, atleast one person is looking forward to your next chappie!

oh and for later chappies, you know what would be good, is if you bring julian back. oh now that would be good! ;)

You got the characters pretty well, and it sounds like you read the book. If that is so, then you will remember that at the end of the book Julian begged for Jenny's forgivness. He probably wouldn't do that if he was going to be mean like this. Of course, he is Julian, so you never know!

this a great fic! i dont think there is any other one with jenny zach pairing. and although i prefer jenny julian pairing, this is really good. for once some one is writing a good fic on the forbidden game finally, i actually havent read any other ones.

your style of writing is good and i definitely want to know what happens. and i havent read the hunter (just the other two) so i dont know if their pairing was hinted. and was there any quotes from the hunter in this chap coz i dont think there is any italics here.

anyways update soon.

PS shouldnt julian be a bit angry coz zach likes her, i mean he does love her after all!