Reviews for Cardfight Vanguard: TimeXross
KenosDC1 chapter 3 . 7/19
Not a bad chapter, but if you don't mind, I will give some constructive critisicm based on what I've seen, it'll be broken into two parts since there are only two main problems.

The first problem is dialogue format, this is mostly just a pet peeve of mine, so it's not that much of a problem on your part, but I like it when the dialogue of characters is easy to distinguish and follow, when I read this, it's in large chunks combining the dialogue of multiple characters, making it hard sometimes to follow along, I won't lie to you, there were a few parts where I just skipped because it was quite large and I wasn't sure who was saying what, you do break off a good amount of the time, making seperate lines that are easy to follow, but I think it would help to break off each character's dialogue and response to dialogue.

The second problem is the cardfights, this once more isn't too much of a problem on your part, but similar to the first problem, I found it hard to follow along with the fight, I wasn't sure of the hand count, the damage count, or the power each unit was attacking with, I just saw calls, rides, attacks, drive checks, etc, but it would benefit the story if you did this because then readers can follow along with the fight and feel the hype, for example, if you're doing a super important fight, say Osono vs Kagura, we would want to know what's happening so we can feel the hype that's supposed to come with the possible stakes of the fight, if the readers aren't sure of how the fight is progressing, they could feel lost and become uninterested.

Once more, this is just my opinion, feel free to follow it or not if you want, but those are the problems I have, sorry for ranting on, and I look forward to more chapters. Cya.
KenosDC1 chapter 2 . 7/16
This was a pretty good chapter, at like that Kirito is the only one who can see Clockwork, well, except for the SoP (Servants of Parallel), and I also like the Steamvisor sub clan name.

What really interests me about Kiri is that because he moves a lot, I’m guessing he’s not the best socially and I’d like to see how he progresses with it thanks to the friends he will soon meet.

I’m pretty excited to see how this fight ends.
KenosDC1 chapter 1 . 7/16
I really like these character bios, I’m honestly excited to see how this story progresses.

You get a follow and fav from me. To the next chapter!