Reviews for I Don't Think This Can Be Repaired |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So good you can feel Hutch sorrow and you can feel their love for each other |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so beautiful. The boys are way too close to let this seperate them. I love how you brought that out in this story. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() This was heartfelt, warm and overwhelmingly beautiful. You had from start t finish on the edge of my seat. Beautifully done. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() Great story, although it is usually Hutch who is rock steady. I could feel his pain. That whole episode with Kira, had me paint her as the villain, and yet you looked beyond Kira and in this version Hutch is carrying the weight of the whole Kira debauchle. Knowing our guys though, you could just as easily written this with Starsky feeling the weight. That's why, although some felt at the end they were suggesting a threesome, they knew that in the future no one, would ever destroy their twosome. Wonderful job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely wonderful. So well thought out and plausible and written. Loved every word. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh me goodness! Where are my tissues! This is such a wonderful story of love and friendship tearing down hate and failure. Hutch admitting to Starsky how bad he messed up and Starsky seeing through his anger to forgive his friend - Me and Thee conquers always. Thanks for a great story! I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This made me cry! So touching, excellent work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, this is wonderful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think I am one of the few people (if not the only one) who thinks before Starsky told Hutch about his feelings for Kira, that Hutch and Kira were showing obvious signs they were interested in each other, and it wasn't really fair for Starsky to make a claim on Kira. Having said that, you wrote some good Hutch angst, including that Hutch felt so bad about sleeping with Kira he was going to give Ollie to Starsky, and was also going to quit being a cop. Though at the end of the story I am glad that Starsky and Hutch are still good, and it would be Me and Thee always! Thank you for sharing your story. I am looking forward to reading some more stories by you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this piece, painful as it is to read. It would have made an awesome scene in the episode-both explaining/confirming what we already know is happening with Hutch during that season and healing the horror of his betrayal. As it is, we are left hanging...wondering what happened to restore their relationship. It surely must have been something just like this! I will always think of your story when I watch "Starsky vs Hutch." In fact, it will be much easier to watch now. Thank you for filling in the blank at least for me! I love the natural flow of your style, though someone else may care more than I do about a few missing commas. You tell a harrowing and beautiful story without making your sentence structure/word choices conspicuous-which allowed me to focus entirely on the story itself. I always appreciate not stumbling over awkward sentence structure! You've captured the poignancy of this moment perfectly without being heavy-handed. I would love to see more "missing scene" stories from you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now, why did you want to make me cry? |